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Reviews for My Friend, My Lover

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Anon on May 20, 2006
    your sex scene... very unrealistic
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on May 20, 2006
    Nice update dude and that was a nice short quicky they had in school although you just know that little mental slippage of Jean's is going to bite her in the ass. (not literally unless she likes that type of things lol)

    Anyway I can see Rogue getting Jean alone and confronting her all about this if not in the next chapter then soon. She is the more direct of the X-Men I think and I really look forward to that.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on May 19, 2006
    Oooh...looks like somebody's in trouble! I can't wait to see how they weasel out of this one! ;)
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  • From ANON - Josh on May 10, 2006
    good chapter hope to read more
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  • From ANON - Amazing Redd Phoenix on May 06, 2006
    Haha, it was only logical for them to think that Scott and Jean were doing drugs. If I were them I'd think that too. It's great to see this other side of Scott and Jean. More 'fun' and 'playful'. I wonder what Logan and the others are going to do to find out what's going on between them. Please update soon.
    Jott 4Ever
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on May 05, 2006
    Hey buddy great chapter there I liked how Rogue was the one to finally point out just how strange things were getting, and I have to wonder why she cared so much lol. I can't wait to see what Ororo does to get logan off the scent as it were. I loved the little role playing there that was fun to watch.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on May 05, 2006
    Man, someone should make a video out of this! :D Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Josh on May 01, 2006
    Hey great installment and god I thought I had an idea of what would happen but nothing like that.. I thought she would wait to do anal but I was wrong. Well hope to get the next update soon and great job on writing the story as good as u did
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on April 30, 2006
    This chapter sures has made up for the long waiting! :) A lot smutt and good characterization. You have those twosome really down, and I'm very glad with the scenes we are seeing for now. They are great! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Wen on April 30, 2006
    Oh I think they'll be caugth
    And I hope they'll speak about love sooner than in "hanging by a moment" ;)
    Carry on
    JOTT FOREVER
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  • From ANON - alrischa on April 28, 2006
    Yay finally! I was beginning ot think that aff.net was going to be down forever!
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on April 28, 2006
    Hey man glad to see you finally getting a chance at updating this I know you've wanted to for sometime now and it was well worth the wait. I do wonder what else is going to happen but I think you said this is where Logan/Ororo get into it. What happens? While this was going on they found the rest of the tea and drank it without knowing what it was?
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on March 10, 2006
    Chapter 10

    Well AFF.Net is back up to it's former glory so I'm here to review. I must say that this was a very well done intro to Crystal and I hope she shows up more later on and helps to teach Jean and Scott more on sex. I hope Jean did get that prono tape with her in it and is surprised to see Crystal in it lol.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on March 06, 2006
    great chapter
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on February 04, 2006
    Chapter 9

    Another fine chapter. Really I like how you portrait and explore the characters, their relationships and their evolution. And I like how you write the smut scenes. They are very, very enticing ^_^.

    Heh. If the team ever finds out about Scott and Jean's methods for having fun, their jaws will hit the ground. :D

    Usually you don't see Ororo characterized like a motherly figure and a female role model for the girls, but it works here and gives more dimensions to her character.

    I take Scott and Jean will keep on exploring in future chapters and you're about of going deeper in LoRo. I'm glad.
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