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By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - alrischa on June 25, 2006
    Wow, that was a lot of catching up to do. Loved the chapters. Didn't see the Taryn conflict coming, but I loved how you wanted to tie the story back in with Evo. Nice job :)
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on June 25, 2006
    chapter 18

    Well I can see Jean has her work cut out for her, and Scott is having doubts about Tyran I guess this dance will show how things go with all of this pretty soon. Nice scene with Logan and Ororo why do I get the feeling this will pick up again with those two later on with the bike ride? Maybe stopping off at a wooded area for a little 'late night hunting' if you get my drift lol.
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  • From ANON - Wen on June 22, 2006
    she could ask him, afterall, she can pretend that she doesn't know he has a date
    But overall, if only she had sent him a telepathic message or burst in the middle of Taryn's words, she would have had her chance, as Scott would have given her the priority for a talk
    Carry on!
    JOTT FOREVER !
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 21, 2006
    Chapter 17

    Oh, Hell, things have got more complicated only of sudden. Right when we thought Scott and Jean would get a good, nice chat and a bit of lovemaking later, Taryn gets in the way. I suppose you wanted surprising us, didn't you?

    What will Jean do now? Poor thing. Will she follow the advice she got? Or she'll kill Taryn first?

    Next chapter soon, pal. Please. I'm pleading you (Can you tell "No" to this face? :().
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on June 18, 2006
    Well this was s nice tie in to that epsiode of the dance, like that bit with Kurt and the gloves and stuff. And another nice twist with Taryn and all as well so now Jean has to do soemthing before that dance. I mean it's not like she can try something at the dance that wouldn't be right and too late as well. So she might as well suck it up and tell him soon before that.
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  • From ANON - Harley on June 13, 2006
    It's good, keep it up! :)
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  • From ANON - avestrion on June 13, 2006
    Good but sex scenes likes eachother.You must do something strange.
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  • From ANON - Wen on June 12, 2006
    Will the at least admit their feelings ? I hope so !
    Ororo wasn't surprised that Jean knew for her and Logan lol
    CARRY ON
    JOTT FOREVER !
    Wen
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 11, 2006
    Chapter 16

    Ah, so at last their feelings are beginning to evolve. Mm... A pity. Now they get Logan off their backs, they have to deal with a new complication. Well, this is their punishment/reward. :D

    Hey, that was a really good LoRo sex scene. Really good. :)

    Please, keep on writing more chapters of this great fic. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on June 11, 2006
    Well I was wondering when Jean and Scott's feelings would start to evolve and they would have to deal with it, loved the talk with Jean and Ororo there. Plus a nice look for Ororo with the scene with her and Logan very nice. And of course another nice sex scene with Logan and Ororo.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 10, 2006
    The story is great.Sex scenes are great and too hot.But a little exaggerated.I don't like anal.It doesn't work for me.And jean can't be fucked at her ass.It can cause to bad results for her.I don't want it for her.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 08, 2006
    Chapter 15

    Ah. At last the RoLo scene. I had been looking forward to it.

    And it was really good. Since the moment Ororo talked Logan into reason to the moment she talked him into sex. You showed really the deep bond they have.

    And I'm glad of Scott won't be beheaded and eviscerated in the nearby future. :D

    I really want reading more. You rock, pal.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 08, 2006
    Chapter 14

    Yes, this is my review. It was about time, right? :)

    I laughed a lot seeing the remainder mutants cornering Scott and Jean bombarding them with questions. I pity them, but they deserve it partially. They should have been more careful in the school. ;)

    Damn it, that lovemaking sessiong was hot! You have outdone yourself here, man.

    I only hope Logan doesn't kill them. Ouch.
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  • From ANON - Wen on June 06, 2006
    LOL, the shame of their life lolololololololol
    And that's for sure, it's unbelievable that they're still only "friends with benefics", you got to change it Slicky
    And please, answer to us, we didn't even know you had updated :(
    Wen

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  • From ANON - Wen on June 06, 2006
    lol it was really risky, they searched for it
    oh man, they're dead lol
    Wen
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