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By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - agent-g on July 17, 2006
    chapter 21

    Well I can see how Jean and Scott are handling things I'm surprised that by the weekend they just don't rent a hotel and just stay there just for some peace and quiet or something lol.

    I see that kitty and Rogue got a tasts of things and it was a new kinky thing Jean and Scott did, they may be careful or they may like someone looking in on them, and at least now Kitty and Rogue know what it's like to have good sex so they now have something to compare to for their own first times.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on July 16, 2006
    Mmm...jott smut. :D
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 10, 2006
    Hey great update and I figured as much that Jean would break first but hope to see an update soon. Keep up the great writings
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on July 10, 2006
    Chapter 20

    Oh, Hell. The other students couldn't simply mind in their own business, could they? And the thigns were going so well at last...

    A very emotional chapter, pal. I'm dying for seeing what will happen now. I guess Scott will get angry with Jean now. I hope she can explain to him how Rogue and Kitty had pestered her until she snapped.

    I'm feeling this end this already gearing towards the end. A pity, but I'll enjoy it while it lasts.
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  • From ANON - Wen on July 10, 2006
    Hank didn’t notice her bruises ?
    Jean, you just have to say that you were making out
    oh man stop Jean, stop lololol oh man, you’ll have to erase their mind now lol
    oh no, the idiots, they told the others….Jean won’t bear it, her powers will go crazy
    If the professor doesn’t help, they’ll leave
    Carry on
    JOTT FOREVER !
    Wen

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  • From ANON - alrischa on July 09, 2006
    Aw man, poor Scott and Jean. I sense comfort smut coming up for the next chapter. ;)
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on July 09, 2006
    Well I just knew this would get out and you know Jean normally has a firm grip but when she loses her temper she really goes all out when she does. I bet those girls got a bit more out of her then they thought they would and their view of Jean changed from all the stuff they do lol. Well they may not feel great now but once the shock gets over it and they get comfortable with everyone knowing things will get easier.
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 08, 2006
    Hey great update and keep it up. I guess they decided to say fuck let's be together. And now Rogue has her proof but will they let it stand or tell everyone that they don't care anymore
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on July 04, 2006
    Chapter 19

    You have written a really heart-wrenching chapter, pal. It was a very intense emotional turmoil.

    I loved how Scott dealt with Duncan. That prick had got it coming for a long time. He never took Scott seriously, and that was his mistake.

    Yet... Jean getting helplessly beaten up and nearly raped by Duncan despite she is perfectly capable to kick his sorry ass is something I have seen too many times in fanfiction. I don't tell it didn't make sense in the context of the situation or your story, but I think I'd have preffered Scott showed up right after Jean slammed Duncan on the lockers.

    Anyway it is a minor gripe.

    I very much enjoyed when they fessed up at last their feelings and fucked like bunnies in heat. Beautifully done.

    And that naughty Rogue... I wonder what she''l do now she knows. ;)

    You have my full attention, pal. I know you won't squander it. :)
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on July 03, 2006
    Chapter 19

    Well it's nice to finally see Jean and Scott get together 'officailly' so I take it the next day they'll be all couply and then this will be a surprise for (most) of them. That should be nice to see although will you show what Logan and Ororo were doing in that bike ride during this time or just leave it where you left off last time?
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  • From ANON - Wen on July 03, 2006
    Oh man, what a chapter !
    It was close from a power surge or a murder
    Not yet "I love you" but the admited their feeling
    And Rogue, well no, they don't mind if she knows they're together, it's the fact she know that they're sexual active which is a little more troubling lol
    Carry on !
    Jott forever
    and please, could you send me a mail when you post a new chapter ?
    Wen
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  • From ANON - alrischa on July 02, 2006
    Yay, they finally got together and it's about time. :)
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  • From ANON - Josh on July 01, 2006
    Hey Slickboy great update and hope everything works out for Logan and Ororo they seem to be able to balance eahc other out and well Scott and Jean need to stop being so stubborn and say the words they need to tell each other the three words they can't say
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on July 01, 2006
    Chapter 18

    I know, I'm late. I'm sorry, pal. I hope my review can atone it. :)

    You showed very well how conflicted Jean is. I hope she is successful. It would be very sad she lost Scott right when she was realizing her feelings for him.

    I think Logan summarized efficiently the situation; still I hope Ororo is right. No big surprise here. ;)

    And I hope she shows it to Logan! :D

    Yes, she definitely showed him. Good girl, Ororo.

    Poor Scott. He should get himself a backbone to deal with Taryn. Maybe then he wouldn't in that mess.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I think I can virtually guarantee it will be a dance neitehr of them will forget soon -even if some of them would try hard-.

    Keep up the good work! ^_^


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  • From ANON - Crisi on June 29, 2006
    Great story so far, can't wait for more. I've been reading a few of your stories, here and at fanfiction.net. The only problem I've noticed so far is that sometimes you get your time periods wrong - like saying its been months one place, and one month another place, or other small details like that. ... And you haven't done it awhile, but personally I just can't picture softball sized breasts as all that large. Wrong analogy ^_^ Otherwise, I love the characterization and I can't wait to see them finally work things out.. eventually.
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