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Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Meechypoo on July 09, 2014
    Im so happymthat Clint has finally gotten his act together and he and Harry are trying to mend their relationship. Of course, just as Harry is starting to feel safe and happy, shit happens to break him down again. Let's just hope that Clint and the boys can get there to save the day and that both Harry and Sean, as well as their babies, are all ok!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - aly on May 29, 2014
    I love your stories. Cant wait to see more of this!
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  • From ANON - anonymous on May 10, 2014
    Star, I have been reading your fics for over a year now. Never have I had anything I didn't like. You made me ship things I never thought I could ship. You are brilliant and I love you. That said, I am having a very hard time reading this fic and enjoying the ship. I know Harry went through a lot of trauma. I know he has every right to be angry with Clint. I even know I would not blame him for asking Clint to stay out of his life if Clint showed any sign of being untrustworthy or cruel to Harry. Yet, Harry isn't innocent in all of this either. He openly flirts with the other Avengers, almost seemingly to get a rise out of Clint. Maybe that is a misinterpretation. If it is, I apologize. Harry also seems to be ignoring how much Clint is trying to help. I mean, Clint called enforcers on himself. That takes a serious amount of self-reflection to do and a lot of love for someone else to want to make them feel safe away from you. Yet, he asks one question about who Harry might have been with and Harry is set to get angry once more. I can understand Harry feeling stifled by the Avengers and they did need to step back a bit, Clint included. I am really concerned about the relationship to come, however. Clint is really trying, trying to the point of shoving his instincts down at times. Harry seems to start trying until Clint lets his self-control break. I want to be on Harry's side, but each time he gets angry, I feel myself defending Clint. I am scared this relationship will become emotionally abusive against Clint rather than two men trying to make a really bad situation into a good one. I don't want Harry to be forced into loving Clint. I know that is wrong. At the same time, it's not fair for Harry to basically be telling Clint he has to be perfect or he will leave and take the baby with him. This has been the hardest review I ever had to write because I do love you so much. Please, don't hate me for saying this. I hope things between Harry and Clint get better soon.
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  • From ANON - Dominique 1 on May 10, 2014
    i think it would be awesome if they all listen to what harry said vie jarvis and that if clint went to harry's old house and found everything that wasn't destroyed by the bomb like harry's parents wedding rings
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  • From ANON - Kirrishar on April 30, 2014
    Loving this story :) can't wait for the next chapter to see how if he manages to get away
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  • From ANON - absinthe on March 16, 2014
    This story makes me happy! I hope there's more soon!!!
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  • From dime on December 29, 2013
    Great chapter!
    I'm sorry to see that Harry once again does not trust the Avengers and sees them as a sort of enemy.
    It's ridiculous that they are setting the psychologist on him. I'd think that everyone actually *wants* him to get help, to get better, but that guy poking around in Harry's secrets to the point where Harry will not speak to him at all is seriously unhelpful. Who ever thought that would be a good idea??
    I'm very curious about the outcome of this. I can't see any way past Harry revealing Magic to the Avengers, so if you find one, I wanna see! ^^ I hope you'll find the time and inspiration to update again soon. :)
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - ArtemisEarth on December 24, 2013
    Eeek! It's updated! You have just made my day. I am loving your story so far. I feel so invested in this. I just want Harry to be happy and you just keep throwing things at him. I love it. Great job. Thank you for sharing it with us. I know you don't have to, so thanks. And never feel pressured to update. Your true fans will be here, always. Merry Christmas.
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  • From ANON - Xam on November 10, 2013
    It's a fantastic story, please don't stop now! I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know how the story goes on...
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  • From dime on November 03, 2013
    This was great!
    Poor Harry... he can never catch a break, can he? I'm glad that he managed to get all those guys stunned, but he did take some heavy hits. I hope both he and the baby will be fine. And I really hope the stunned guys will be captured and reveal enough information for S.H.I.E.L.D. to flatten their entire organization.
    Wonder how Harry will explain the unconscious men lying about to the Avengers, though. XD
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on October 26, 2013
    Glad to cya back, hope you doing alright, but loved this chapter, curious if they get those men to talking about who it is that is after Harry.
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  • From ANON - meg on October 25, 2013
    LOVE LOVE LOVEEEE this story I was a bit worried I wouldnt like the cross over at first, but I love it Star! Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on October 25, 2013
    Yay! The story lives again! I particulary like Harry Potter/Avengers crossovers and yours is one of my favorites. And, as much as I like Rise of the Drackens, I cannot wait for you to update on this one again.
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  • From ANON - BabblingBrooke on October 25, 2013
    Oh. My. Goodness!You're back! I loved the cliffhanger! Haven't had a good one like that in a while! I really liked this chapter. I can't wait for Harry to finally drop the bomb on the poor, unsuspecting Avengers that once again, the world's a little bit stranger than even they thought. And I've probably said it before but I will say it again, YOU ARE A FANTASTIC WRITER!

    Giant cyber-cookies for you!
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  • From ANON - mammafoxaya on September 23, 2013
    alright, sooooo i love you as a writer. every single story you have written pulls me in and makes me wish to read more. you always leave me on the edge of my seat wanting to read more. with all the things you have been through and some of the negative comments/reviews you have received, i am surprised you keep writing. however i am very glad that you do. i hope after the new harry potter fanfic you have going with harry and fenrir that you will continue this one. it is wonderful. i also wonder sometimes if you roleplay with your characters. because if so, gods i would love to roleplay with you. your style is amazing
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