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Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From BellixiesPixies on March 01, 2013
    thogh times ahead for Clint...lol
    tnk u for the update
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on March 01, 2013
    yea, favorite kind of fandom = 3=
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  • From Bickymonster on March 01, 2013
    Great Chapter; glad to see you have not made Harry overly forgiving, not that I thought you would. :)
    Loved the kitchen scene, thought it was really cute, great to see the dynamic between them all as a group and a bit of Clint's jealousy. Also yay for protective angry Pepper. :)
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  • From Redkenja on March 01, 2013
    This is grantastic! Though there is a mistake in the part where you write about Harry's owl order. I don't think he is the type to get things full of "slave".
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  • From ANON - anon on February 25, 2013
    I am quite confused and have just one question, is the alpha/beta/omega thing from a fandom or made up?
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  • From ANON - darkroses on February 23, 2013
    The Avenger's are going to have some major ass kissing to do to get back on Harry's good side. I somehow doubt they have ever dealt with an omega like Harry before. It will be interesting to see how they deal with a Harry that is independent and not just going to do as he's told since they really only know Harry through the video footage of him at the office which makes him appear to be very submissive and obedient and the footage of his capture. So despite the limited time they spent with him in the hospital it wouldn't be unexpected that they are probably expecting him to be submissive and obedient with them the same as he was at work. In which case, boy aren't they in for a rude awakening! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From dime on February 22, 2013
    Really cool crossover. I like it!
    I think if I was Harry, I'd say screw this job - first, he's being exploited by his superior (and I don't think anyone told him yet that the jerk was punished for it), now everyone is lying to him, from the lowest nurse up to the boss of the organization. That's gotta suck. I'm pretty glad I'm neither as overworked as your Harry, nor in any other way in a similar situation, but I imagine my reaction would have been something like run to the top of the tower, get out my Firebold and leave. If Europe and the US didn't work out, maybe Asia will be nice that time of year...?
    Looking forward to more!
    - Dime
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  • From ANON - crazypagen on February 21, 2013
    in a weird way I kind of like the sheepish cowardly way clint went about letting harry know about the mating. harry showed all of the alphas that he would not take anything lying down, especially if it involved him. let's face it harry is more stubborn then a terrier after something. will you include harry's parseltounge ability? and maybe kick clint for being a coward? and thank you for letting me know how to pronounce the name of the holiday.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 20, 2013
    so its official. after finally getting time to read up on lycanthrope factory i finally had time to read this and have decided that you are officially one of the best of not the best fanfiction writer i have had the privelage to follow.
    thank you for your hard work !!!
    dwood
    your fics are a-maz-ing!! :)
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on February 19, 2013
    Hot dame harry knows now i so hope that he gives them all hell and that they suffer just a little except for maybe tony and pepper and bruce was just listen to steve so want more love this really good
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  • From ANON - darkroses on February 15, 2013
    This was a great chapter. I loved Tony's explanation for why he acts differently then the other Alpha's. That cliff hanger was evil the suspense is killing me as to whether Harry is going to flip out and demand an explanation or if he's going to try to hide the fact he knows which would give Clint the chance to come clean which will hopefully make it easier for Harry to come to terms with what happened and accept Clint and the other Avengers being a part of his life. I can't picture Harry holding what happened against Clint either way but it will take a much longer and harder time for Harry to accept what happened and trust Clint and the Avengers if he thinks they were trying to hide it from him. Anyway I absolutely love this story and hope it turns into a very, very long epic story. I know you already have other stories going but I hope you won't cut this short, even if we have to wait a long time between updates being able to read the characters relationships and storyline fully develop is more than worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - crazypagen on February 15, 2013
    I love so far... just as good as the rise of....... why not owl st. mungo's? is Hedwig still alive? and didn't Clint get shot 6 times in ch 2? 4 were through and through's.... 2 got stuck in bone... that totals 6. what about the fight that killed Voldemort? and when will harry find out he is pregnant? can harry attack Clint when he finds out... like through a hex or prank him good? please that would be a hoot. how do you pronounce the name of your holiday? welsh has some interesting tricks for spelling.
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  • From Bickymonster on February 14, 2013
    So good, really loving this story, I particularly love the balance between Harry being fiery and stubborn whilst still being kind of cute.
    Flowed beautifully and was an easy read but progressed the story along. looking forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on February 14, 2013
    poor harry hate the cliffy he now knows clint fuck him and that he might be pregnant knowing harry he might think clint doesn't want him love this
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  • From EasyReader on February 14, 2013
    Oh Star what a place to leave us at!! I thought Clint's room might be closer to Harry's but now I can see that would be a problem for the Avenger bunch as they don't know what will happen when Harry is told. I can't wait to see how Harry starts to manage the group. Will they find out about his magic before Fury does?
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