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Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 20, 2013
    dame at this time happy for the chapter but i also wish that all of harry's magical stuff pop away to his vault at gringott's like a safety measures at least his family books and pictures that are magical and the bike and jacket and that he doesn't find it out until he goes to the bank as well as his parents rings his father cloak should not be able to be destroyed maybe not all of it but at least must of it for him dame star even he's bag was in their are at least the wedding rings, most of my photo albums his Mother's journal, his Godfather's motorbike and leather jacket and any magical books like i said that are from the family not his school books it could have pop them self like harry the moment the house blow up i can't see harry not butting protection on them for fire water damage or it could be some kind of magical family protection that returns it all to the bank and yes i know that it's c-4 but his cloak is supposed to be un able to be destroyed will here's hoping and the cool thing would be that he doesn't find out until later or that he has copies of everything already in his vault his parents picture's moved so maybe they went to another frame or tony finds the bike in repairs it for harry and Natasha is being a bitch even when she is trying to be nice i like that he wants to talk to clint and ask him about getting her off his back
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  • From ANON - Grim1989 on March 20, 2013
    Poor Harry, I wonder if they can salvage anything of his, like his photo album.
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  • From Bickymonster on March 20, 2013
    Brilliant, great update; poor Harry though, losing everything like that. :( But so sweet how he was letting Clint be protective.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 20, 2013
    so harry is going to pop off to the wizarding world
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 19, 2013
    so very funny and good i hope they tell thor that harry was talking about his cock. love this
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on March 19, 2013
    It's been a few weeks, but that is alright, life likes to grab you at the ballz sometimes.
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  • From ANON - crazypagen on March 14, 2013
    when you say fruit squash, do you mean fruit smoothies or fruit juice? will harry experience food cravings like most pregnant women do? or mood swings? when I was pregnant with my son I craved chocolate covered black olives with cherry sauce, cheese curds, and clam chowder. will the avengers enable harry to visit the graves of his family? or maybe just clint? as a way to court harry. I cant wait for the next chapter. I just love how you have portrayed a pregnant harry in your stories. do you celebrate St. Patrick's day? if you do happy St. Paddy's.
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  • From ANON - darkroses on March 04, 2013
    Thank you for two quick updates! I'm glad that at the end of this last chapter Harry was acting more, well...Harryish with his reaction to Clint. I mean I understand that he is upset about being a dad at such a young age and how it happened but he's been acting like such a spoiled immature brat the last couple chapters I wanted to smack him. His attitude and mannerisms have done a complete 180 compared to how he acted in the first chapter, it's like he's a different Harry. Don't get me wrong I am still really into this story and excited to see the Avenger's reaction to Harry's magic and he and Clint working out their relationship. Can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Danielle on March 03, 2013
    Hello, StarLight_Massacre. First, I really enjoy your stories; especially Lycanthrope Factory, The Rise of the Drackens, and this one. My favorite is Lycanthrope Factory because I love Harry Potter/Anita Blake crossovers. I agree with you that there aren't enough of them. The ones I have found almost never get finished. I've only recently discovered Harry Potter/Avengers crossovers and it's quickly becoming a favorite as well. I like that you chose Clint as Harry's partner; it is usually one of the more noticable Avengers, like Tony or Steve. Second, I have noticed in this story that you use a lot of run-on sentences with the use of commas. I went back though the other two stories and found that there were a few in each of the chapters. However, it happens much more often in this story which is why I noticed it. I actually feel like a jerk even mentioning it because the stories themselves are really great. Thanks for continuing to write these stories. I hope my review was helpful and not discouraging. Thank you, Danielle
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  • From BellixiesPixies on March 03, 2013
    ugh what is wrong with Nat >[ that was uncalled for...
    thank u for the update
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  • From ANON - grim1989 on March 03, 2013
    I'm curious if he'll use the cloak and freak one of the Avengers with it xD
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 03, 2013
    Awesome star love this love the last comment part.Natasha's a bitch it wasn't her place to say anything harry is free to do whatever he want's clint not he's bonded did she forget that clint rape harry what if it was her she understand be buddy buddy with clint if he did it to her . i don't think so.Just not her place beside's I don't think that they should have let harry go by himself they should have had someone following in not being seen. For protecting but she had no right to say anything to harry about clint if harry wanted to be with thor he can i don't see thor or any of them taking harry away from clint but still. ask yourself would you want to be mated to your accidental rapist.i think that clint needs to prove himself to harry because it was a accident but keep pushing harry and he might just get up and leave since they don't no about magic they might never fine harry and she should be happy that harry hasn't charged him yet. even steve and thor wanted to kick clint's ass but they understand what happen i say Natasha should just leave harry alone. love tony in the rest. harry need's time. awesome brilliant love it
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  • From ANON - Patricia on March 02, 2013
    At first I was slightly upset that you had worked on writing this and not The Rise of the Drackens. I take it back. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on March 02, 2013
    kind of funny how harry gots the hots for thor awesome love it and for tony blueberry pancakes cookies cheesecake ice cream bread so many things loving that i love that pepper was on harry's side that was awesome but so looking forward to harry getting with clint i also love the knotting when they mate so clint wants to be with harry but that will take a lot and i can only guess that adult heat means harry was a virgin so cool kind of wish that they all work it out by tony we know that they all think harry is sexy s as hell so that his really good love when harry told clint if he touch his child he'll snap his neck that was awesome hope the potion help harry's legs
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  • From ANON - Me on March 01, 2013
    lovely as always star thanks and keep being your brillant self
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