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By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - alrischa on February 03, 2006
    Wow, they're getting more bold aren't they? I'm surprised no one walked in during the locker room romp lol

    So, are they going to try the backseat of Scott's car next? ;)
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  • From ANON - Wen on February 03, 2006
    they'll be caught, they'll be caugth lol
    maybe in the shop ? lol
    CARRY ON
    JOTT FOREVER
    and I'm going to bed, it's 4 a.m.........
    Wen
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on February 03, 2006
    Very nice chapter and nice DR session. For a mintute I thought it would be them using that for a little 'relief' but I guess that's later on. Liked the lockeroom scene with them that was nice and to see a little more of their adventerous sidee showing. I liked the talk between Jean and Ororo, I wonder what else ororo will teach Jean later on? That will be fun seeing the older woman tell her quite a few sexual things they could try.

    Also a friend of mine has a Amara/OC fic up here called "A Heated Moment" it's a deleted scene from his fic "Knight's Calling" at FF.net and you should check them out. They're pretty good.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on February 03, 2006
    great chapter can't wait to find out what happens
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on January 28, 2006
    Part Eight

    Again, very good sex scene. And character development, too. Qhoting Jean... What’s not to like about that?

    Very funny seeing them making up excuses. They really need being careful. And nice Amanda's mention. I like Kurt and Amanda together -perhaps because they were a canon couple in the comcis-.

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  • From ANON - alrischa on January 27, 2006
    Mmm...hot sex in the shower! I demand more smut! :D
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  • From ANON - wen on January 27, 2006
    She felt his love...
    Hey, he made her bed, but didn't changed her sheets..
    beware, the bathroom isn't sound-proofing lol
    Wow, well caught with Kurt and Kitty lol
    JOTT FOREVER and with a wide opened bond, they can't ignore their feeling longer
    CARRY ON
    Wen
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  • From ANON - x00001 on January 27, 2006
    great chapter can't wait to see what scott and jean get up to next
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on January 27, 2006
    Chapter 8

    Nice shower scene why do I get the feeling that when you were writing Sinister Soldiers that idea poped in your head and you wanted to 'continue' that moment you had to cut off lol. Anyways it's still good but yeah they may have to try to remember to tone it done some just in case. I can't wait to see what they try out next and I see you're leading up to Kurt/Amanda as well. will you do you're own version of Shadow Dance or just kind of comment on what happened in that episode?
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on January 21, 2006
    Part Seven

    Getting in the spirit, indeed.

    I can see Jean is a girl thorough. And anxious.

    That session was very good. Very passionate and beatifully written. Still I think you committed a mistake:

    "Scott’s breathing quickly became more ragged as she felt him start to work his jeans, undoing the fly and giving them a hard tug."

    Did you mean 'he felt her start to work'? I believe it makes more sense.

    Anyway, good chapter. I like how they're starting to experiment and explore possibilities. It's realistic.

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  • From ANON - Wen on January 20, 2006
    Well, Jean's room is kind of sound-proofed, but Scott's one wasn't
    Now Logan better don't enter in the 2 rooms lol
    I don't understand why, with a wide opened bond, they don't feel that they're in love, they should, and they should even tell it by automatism
    What if they don't wake up before the other? oh man lol
    JOTT FOREVER!
    Wen
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  • From ANON - alrischa on January 20, 2006
    Damn, that was orgasmic! :D
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  • From ANON - x00001 on January 20, 2006
    great chapter so jean and scott are lovers now thats good can't wait to find out what happens next
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on January 20, 2006
    chapter 7

    Nice chapter as they start to explore a few different things. I wonder if they'll start looking up things on the internet or sign out certain books to try more things to try out in bed. AS for someone finding out, they should know it's hard to keep anything secret for long in that mansion lol. But boy when that cat gets out of the bag (if you think i'm going to do a pussy joke think again) then that will be hilarious.

    Anyways I can't wait to see what else you got going for this fic.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on January 15, 2006
    Chapter Six

    This part was very funny. I can see they're practically glowing. Still I think they were a tad TOO obvious. They should be more careful or they'll be caught.

    I like a lot ^_^. I want reading more.
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