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Reviews for Hanging By A Moment

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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 11, 2005

    Chapter 15

    Does Betsy really need a boyfriend, right? I hope Warren comes soon to rescue her from her sour cynism. I'm sure of her friends will thank it. By the way, Kurt's phrase was very good. It really fits his character.

    The Kitty/Piotr scene was nice, specially to those of your readers aren't Jott-biased. Of course I'm perfectly satisfied with Jott.

    Rogue's life is being very complicated, isn't it? I hope she can fix her troubles.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 11, 2005

    Chapter 14

    Talks among the girls are always funny. Really I have to commend you on it. And the conversation between Scott and 'Dad' Logan was really humorous. Ugh, I can't imagine my father encouraging me to please my girlfriend.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on June 11, 2005

    Chapter 13

    Well, Scott knows DEFINITELY methods to relief stress. Heh. Good building, great description of the act and excellent character exploration. Although it's a pity Jean and her mother can't get along well.
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on June 11, 2005
    WHOA!! YEAH!! they both admit that they love each other but not to each other's faces yet, its good that they are taking it slow. I can't wait to read more, update soon!
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on June 11, 2005
    Chapter 18
    Loved the little backstory you had and it was sad what Ororo had to go through but I figured something along those lines had to have happened since they only had Sarah. Nice to see now Jean knows she's in love now too I can't wait until she gets back and tells her friends she's in love, they're going to go ballistic.

    Oh man I feel sorry for that one guy that was with Sarah, not satisying her and then running into Logan like that...that will scar you for life.
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 08, 2005
    great chapter can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - Blossom on June 07, 2005
    I have been coming back here for the past 2 weeks reading this! Terrific story!
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on June 07, 2005
    OH MY GOD! Update, i want to see what happens with Jean and Scott! I'm a diehard JOTT fan, i want more JOTT!
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on June 05, 2005
    Chapter 17

    I liked how you put in Rose there I liked that bit a lot. Loved how Logan and Ororo hooked up and I liked Sarah in this and how she and Jean are getting along. I can't wait to see what you got cooked up next. Oh and it's about time Scott admited he loved her now only Jean has to and then say it to eath other. I get the feeling this was the best ting she could have done going to his parents place.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on June 03, 2005
    I loved it. It was subtle, but had a really nice flow to it. :)
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  • From ANON - RedPhoenix1821 on June 03, 2005
    OH-MY-GOD!! What a wonderful story! After some of those chapters i had to go outside and take a breather and make sure my mind was still functioning properly. Update soon, i want so eagerly to know what happens in their relationship! I thoroughly enjoyed this story and i want you to write more soon! Please, i'm dying here to know more!
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  • From ANON - x00001 on June 01, 2005
    great chapter i thiught we would of seen sarah in this chapter must be in the next one can't wait to see what happens keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on May 30, 2005
    Chapter 16
    That was a very nice moment there with Jean and Ororo I really liked it and Logan tryign to help her out with her wanting to go into another field of study was nice to see too and I can't wait until X23 shows up next now THAT I got to see.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on May 27, 2005
    great chpater can't wai to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - Silversmith on May 27, 2005
    Love the Kitty and Peter shippiness! Their moments alone together are incredibly erotic. Really sensual, but emotional too. Good to see that they are written in character, AND get to show their passionate sides. I think all the couples should get to explore their hidden fantasies! Great story.
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