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Reviews for Hanging By A Moment

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Agent-G on April 20, 2005
    Very nice look into their last relationships. I get the feeling that Besty will have a freaky side to match Warren's. You know I nearly laughed that my OC baasically stole Scott's girlfriend since he's not the type to do that on purpose but still it's kind of funny. At least those two are FINALLY going to try and have a relationhsip with each other and we all know they'll find love with each other.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on April 18, 2005
    great chapter man of jean and scott talkig about there pasts
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  • From ANON - alrischa on April 17, 2005
    I'm mildly surprised that Duncan and Taryn didn't come across as jerks, but then again, you are totally against character bashing, so. :p Hurrah for smut, definitely looking forward to more! XD
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on April 16, 2005
    Chapter 8
    Well it's nice to see what their first times were and like I told you Logan talking about sex is just funny, I mean I can't really picture him doing that. Ororo yes since she pretty much was naked all the time in that village where she lived in Africa. You know I would have thought Duncan would have been pretty bad for Jean's first time, maybe because I don't like that guy.

    As for Scott's first time, I take it she was a bit experienced from that description. ALthough I think it is easier for guys then woman. I can't wait to see what's next and the other couples especially.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on April 16, 2005

    Beautiful. I must tell I liked how you explore the differences and similarities, regarding relationships and sexuality, between men and women. There was good hindsight here.

    Other than that... I think you could have spared us from the Duncan scene. O, well, never mind. And I have much fun reading how Logan advised Scott about pleased women. God, I can picture Logan explaining that, but I think telling it to his son had to be awkward not matter what.

    I like how Scott and Jean's personalities are, as similar and yet so different.

    These chapters are very good, but I think in the next one you must focus in another couple to balance the story. I'm looking forward to Warren and Betsy.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on April 15, 2005
    amother great chapter man this story keeps getting better and better
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on April 13, 2005

    That was a good chapter. A series I can sincerely ENJOYING reading isn't very common, specially in smut fics. Thanks. Please, keep up this. You're doing an excellent work.
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  • From ANON - alrischa on April 12, 2005
    Hurrah for smut! Great way to get the day of homework started ;) Loving it, wanting more! :D
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on April 12, 2005
    Chapter 7

    Yeah military people are VERY strict about being tidy my little brother is in the army now and he said the same thing. Nice little bit with X-factor there, that nearly made me laugh seeing it. Cute with Jean being jealous of Sarah there although I was expecting her to be younger then him but it does work with Jean's famliy and her sister too.

    I can't wait to see what happens next, will Jean finally realize she found herself 'the one' and what will she tell the other girls?
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on April 10, 2005

    I'm sorry for having not reviewed earlier. I must tell this chapter was exceptional. I really loved it. The talk was beautiful and touching. And your way of using old Scott and Jean's traumas to develop theirs pasts and personalities was amazing. A nice interlude between sex scenes shows how you are trying giving real depth to the tale.

    By the way, I've noticed you're using background of other stories of yours.
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on April 09, 2005
    Chapter 6

    Another nice chapter I see you put in elements of Evolution of the Heart in this with Scott singing on the streets. It's also nice that those two could share each other's pain like that and will make them closer to each other later on. It was really touching at certain places too like how Scott described the plane crash and how Jean dealt with Annie's death.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on April 08, 2005
    great chapter man its nice to scott a jean together i like this non power story of your its great
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  • From ANON - Alrischa on April 08, 2005
    Loved the chapter, you know I do. The conversation was handled really well, simple yet emotionally powerful. Can't wait for the smut that's coming up ;)
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  • From Lightning on April 05, 2005
    great chapter my friend i can't wait to read the next chapter
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  • From ANON - REALITYBENDER on April 03, 2005
    Another excellent story. Are X-23 and Alex going to show up? Liked Ororo and Logan being his foster parents. Keep the terrific work.
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