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Reviews for Hanging By A Moment

By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Mouse- on May 07, 2005
    Oh. My. God. I need a shower...
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  • From ANON - jenskott on May 05, 2005

    Another fine chapter. I can tell Betsy needs really a man -and everybody of us know who taht man is and hope he gets introudced soon-. And Scott and Jean a shower urgently. A COLD shower, I mean. Christ, they can't keep theirs hands aprt each other for long, can they?

    And they're corrupting other people's minds. Such bad example. Tsk, tsk.

    More, please! Look at me, I'm begging!
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  • From ANON - TVO on May 04, 2005
    Well I've never reviewed one of these things before, but this seemed like a good enough place to start. Well this is really one of the most well written fanfics ever, you really fleshed out everything well and took a very interesting AU approach. I really like the way you portrayed and presented Scott as a noble, soldier, gentlemen type. I have friends in the military and the marines and I always have the utmost respect and admiration to them, and I believe supporting them takes precendence above all else no matter what. You're descriptions of Scott as a soldier seemed very personal and realistic.

    I've never been much of a fan of the Jean/Scott pairing, but this story actually made me one. Scott seemed like a much cooler guy to be around, and Jean didn't come off as a little miss perfect. So I'm anxious to see what direction you take them, since it seems like you are developing them to be perfect for each other. They seem ready to make their relationship official, although I don't know how much more official you can get when you are dating only one person and sexually flirt with them in a gym then proceed to do you know what in a locker room.

    I like the Wanda/Kurt pairing, but it seemed a little too spontaneous. You just showed Kurt as such a shy guy, it didn't seem like something he would do. I mean you wrote it great, just a little IMHO.

    So now it looks like you are doing Piotr/Kitty, and I can only guess it might involve some sort of..."nude" portrait modeling ;) .

    Keep up the great work with this story, and the thing I can't wait to see is Jean bringing Scott home to see her parents. From your and Jean's descriptions it just seems like it would be a "Guess Who's Comming To Dinner" "Meet The Parents" scenario that would be too great to avoid. I can easily see Jean's blueblood, snobby family not immediately taking to working class marine, Scott.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on May 03, 2005
    great chapter man now wanda and kurt are in love with each other
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  • From ANON - alrischa on May 01, 2005
    Wow, that was a lot of intense smut going on, and you know how much I love jott smut. ;) Can't wait to see how you'll top this chapter in the next one.
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on May 01, 2005
    Chapter 11

    Well that was a nice chapter and it seems both Jean and Scott have a nice little naughty side in them, and I'm glad that Kurt and Wanda hooked up although that was a unique way not that I'm complaining. I wonder how Pietro will like that epsecially if say he walks in on them LOL. Anyways cool chapter and yeah Betsy is jealous but she'll find her man later on as I know you so well as to who to pair her up with.
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  • From ANON - jenskott on April 27, 2005

    I lvoed it. I know I'm repeating myself too often, but I don't see other way to tell it. Your history is fantastic. The non-sex scenes aren't simple prologues, completely forgettable, to the tough stuff but important pieces where the story is narrated and the characters examined. And the sex scenes are really well written.

    What is happening to Rogue?
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  • From ANON - Mouse- on April 26, 2005
    I love this story. The depth and demensions of the characters. The openness. I can't wait for the art scene between Piotr and Kitty! I am anxiously awaiting more chapters. Don't stop writing!!
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  • From ANON - x00001 on April 26, 2005
    great chapter can'tt wait to see what ahppens next
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on April 25, 2005
    Chapter 10
    Nice look at the others and I loved the Piotr/Kitty set up and I can't wait to see how the painting goes. I also liked the girls interaction but boy did you really make Besty a 'potty mouth' in this LOL.

    I can't wait for Kurt/Wanda and a nice look at Rogue/Remy. It seems to me that Rogue wants more out of their relationship then just sex I think. Prsonally she should come out I mean what's the wrost that could happen?
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  • From ANON - alrischa on April 25, 2005
    You do not fail to make your hatred for your poetry class known in your fic lol! Kitty and Piotr were so sweet, Scott and Jean were adorable as always and Romy smut. *happy sigh*
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  • From ANON - abril on April 25, 2005
    Love the Romyness, but I'm thinking that Rogue may want more.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on April 22, 2005

    It was a good chapter, specially the last part where Scott encourages Jean to try pursuing a relationship. I enjoyed reading that.

    I was somewhat surprised of Scott dated Candy Southern, since she was Warren's girlfriend in canon. Personally I had chosen Lee Forrester or Coleen Wing. In fact I think Coleen would fit with the personality you made up to Scott's second date.

    Though I was puzzled when Jean explained why she had broken up with Warren. First she says their personalities were closer and after they were too different? Well, I suppose you meant they were compatible like friends, but not like lovers. I agree wholeheartedly. Warren and Jean can get along well, but there isn't... spark.

    And I laughed when I heard WHO had done Scott gave up the idea of meeting true love some day. Definitely she is NOT a woman capable of showing it. Even though you did Emma nicer here -I must congratulate your efforts for not giving in bashing and portraying her like an evil bitch-, she and Scott have absolutely nothing in common.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on April 21, 2005
    great chapter i liked the way you told of there pass love lives that was great i can't wait to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - alrischa on April 20, 2005
    *teary eyed* An ending to a chapter fit for jott. :)
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