Reviews for Sextremis

BY : Zev95

  • From Combat-master on June 14, 2016

    Well chapter 6 could be vary interesting, would Thor break Pepper or would Pepper endure him long enough to burn the extremis out of her system.

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  • From ANON - douglas on March 26, 2015

    Well, hello, and thank you very much! The dialogue in several spots was like it Could have been right out of script-pages for a next project from MS!!! Your pacing is great, and how you drift from chp to chp fits, so I wonder whom all you might also toss Pepper's way. They just had I-M 1 on earlier on FX, and I'm thinking those 3 stewardesses from the flight out might be very fun.
    Nick Fury has just survived the Winter Soldier, and a doc he has to trust (because he IS SHIELD has had many doctors across this country alone background-checked for the safety and security of his agents and assets) has him on some decent painkillers, but while laying low still has to hit his own dead-drops, and perhaps get some food {see: trashy bad-for-you greasy burgers and onion rings} ...... only to hear banging, blender-noises... and humming? coming from the small kitchen in a tiny little place well off the beaten path where he has only stayed for a week now. `Yes, someone Is humming a jaunty tune` as he slips out his sidearm.
    And, if not THE Captain himself, maybe a chance at Sharon Carter???
    Tony is a bright boy... whose Armor walks around by itself in the dead of night? Maybe something like from chp 1, but Pepper adds her own attachments?!
    What you have here IS VERY FUN, and if this is it, no problem. But... it did have a few dings throughout, so maybe a stronger -beta reader, if you have one.
    Thanks again. I rubbed 2 out over all six.

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  • From ANON - Vera on January 05, 2015

    LOVED THIS. It wasn't so much about the porn, since I'm not so into het & F/F, but the writing was so fresh and flippant it felt like Pepper really had a voice. Everything was ridiculous but plausible like Clint's arrow undies and Darcy masturbating with Domo Arigato, HAHAHA. Kudos to you!

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  • From ANON - vendoban on October 23, 2014

    Dear god, chapter 2's dialogue read like a cheap porn. It was amazing.

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  • From Ratdogtwo on October 23, 2014

    Intersting take on side affects pepper might have do to the extremis.

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