Reviews for Sins of the Past

BY : LadyAlex


  • From OriginalCeenote on July 17, 2010

    This still needs a bit of beta'ing, for things like pronouns and some punctuation, but it's not bad. I'm guessing Charles is walking in this? Not in his wheelchair? You can be flexible with that, for the record; in the comics, Charles lost the use of his legs when an alien dropped a boulder on them, but it wasn't his spine that was damaged, so he could still have physical relations and use his equipment. But, Charles walking is fine, too. Works for me.

    Kurt Marko as a pedophile makes sense. Good work.

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