Reviews for Burdens of Tomorrow

BY : Midnight2783


  • From Silver on August 17, 2013

    Liked reading this particular story of yours, and especially I'm interested in the growing relationship between Scott, Jean, Emma and would really, really, really (x12) see more chapters involving these aforementioned three. Please write more very soon. Thank you.


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  • From Electricboa on April 22, 2012

    I just finished reading your story and I am very much impressed. I recently watched the TV series, 'Wolverine and the X-Men,' and your story works quite well as a sequel to it. The characters feel the same, especially the thin line Cyclops walks between being being a jerk sometimes. I especially like where you're going as far as Scott, Jean, and Emma's relationship, I think it could get very interesting. I've seen a few one shots that have them all as a couple, but none of them actually show the lead up. My only complaint is that this story really needs an update. It has so much potential, I'd really love to see you finish it, it truly deserves it.

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  • From marvelmaster616 on July 18, 2011

    I know I should have written this sooner. I'm sorry it took so long, but I've finally gotten around to it and I'm glad I did! Re-reading this story helps remind me how good it really is. You put a lot of time and effort into this story and for that, you deserve all the accolades that should come along with it. You don't shy away from the tension between Scott, Jean, and Emma. But more importantly, you don't play favorites. One of the biggest problems I see with people who write about this love triangle is that there is often a bias apparent in the way it's depicted. Either Emma Frost is demonized or Jean Grey is demonized or Cyclops is a complete jerk. Nobody tries to find a balance, but you've done so nicely and for that I'm very intrigued!

    By far my favorite part was Jean stripping. I think she does have a very sensual side to her that she doesn't let out very often. Someone like Emma Frost can help her let it out. For some people, they never get that chance. Inspiration comes from unexpected places and I hope that Emma Frost becomes part of it. I'm very interested in seeing where you take the Scott/Jean/Emma relationship. What will the final result be? What will it entail? You have so much going for you! I urge you to continue developing it. Keep up the excellent work and thanks for all your support on my stories!

    Regards,
    MarvelMaster616

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  • From Ratdogtwo on September 30, 2010

    Glad to see you had some time to write another chapter. I really in enjoyed it and look forword to the next chapter when you have the time to write it

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  • From Ratdogtwo on July 08, 2010

    Really love the story. love how jean ask emma for help at the end of chapter 4 keep up the great work

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  • From marvelmaster616 on June 13, 2010

    This story doesn't have any reviews and it seriously deserves them! This chapter was the one with the juicy bits and it's nice to see you throw your hat into the ring here at adultfanfiction. It's a good thing too because there aren't many good Scott/Jean scenes around and yours is one of the best I've seen in a while. I really like how you played off Jean's animosity towards Emma and having that carry over into the sex. It really seems to work well and it should set the tone for more drama. Since Emma is a telepath, she's sure to pick up on those hot moments. I doubt she'll be able to resist even more. lol If she's in love with Scott she's going to start fantasizing and knowing her, she could just broadcast her thoughts into Jean's head to spite her. They may enrage and arouse her at the same time. How's that for confusion? lol Overall, very entertaining. I look forward to more scenes and possibly some moments for Kurt/Wanda as well. Keep up the good work!

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  • From kami85 on May 22, 2010

    please keep going :)


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