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By : Nemain

From ANON - goddess123452003st on March 14, 2005
I loved the story, so far I'm only on chap 10, but I plan to keep on reading. This story's grabbed my interest. I've read some other of Nemain's stories, all wonderful. My favorite author by far on ff.net--Amazing
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From ANON - maggie on November 04, 2004
OMG!!! What an awesome story! I've been reading it on and off at work for a week! I loved it!
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From ANON - Anon on July 03, 2004
I actually found this after reading the first chapter of heatwave. The unusal pairings sent me to this story to catch up. I'm glad I did, very entertaining story. Looking forward to Shiva.
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From ANON - Crys on May 12, 2004
Hey, just thought I'd let you know I enjoyed this story. Very well-written and strong sense of style. I think you did a good job of characterizing, and despite all the drama it wasn't an overload and you avoided being cliche or cheesy. I do have a question though. Wouldn't the solution to the lawsuit, Kitty's name issue, also nullify the paperwork that signed her over to Logan's care? Wouldn't it havso uso used the wrong name just as the lawsuit did? Just a detail that really isn't that significant (then again, I haven't read the sequels yet) but that I thought I'd note. Anyway, once again: good job! =)
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From ANON - UnknownSource on February 04, 2004
Okay Doke, where to begin? I'll start with boy was that long, and in depth, and filled with so many intricate and interwining plots and subplots that at some points my brain nearly frizzled out completely (though that isnt hard). And i've only gotten through part one of what looks to hopefully be the never ending saga. To tell you the truth, i liked that. I'm not into romance, in fact the mere notion of it has made me flee screaming from fics before but i made an exception cause i figured this is like one of the founding stones of XME fanfiction and irettretty glad i did. I loved the attention to detail, I am walking away with one hell of a lotta interesting facts i never knew before, which is always a plus. Shows that 1. you like to give your stories detail and 2. you're on your wo beo becoming a frickin good writer since you're willing to go and research that stuff or if you already knew this stuff at least you're bothering to include it. Little things like that are touches I like. The main plot of Kitty and Kurt's illfated love was a good one, both characters stayed very true to themselves especially dear Kurt, and my only qualm about their storyline was that you layed on a the judaism t a l a little hard. Interesting stuff yes, but maybe you could break it down a little and let it just flow in. No need to have it in chunky style pieces. I think that was my only qualm about the entire story, the rest was excellent. My main love of this story has to be the fact you paid attention to the other characters. This was an all rounder fic, that covered many different aspects and many different characters and just when one part was becoming slightly tideous (not boring just ya know, you wanted to take a break for a moment) there was another character and subplot to take its place. A very hard thing to attempt and a deadly thing to achieve, but you seem to have mastered it nicely. The plots could exist by themselves, but the way that they relied on each other made this fic even more of a gem to read, the story just flowed along with no nasty plotholes or strange jumps in the story telling. Now for writing style, you're a pretty funny writer. The serious bits are good, but i like the way there is always a least one or two little lines that make me spurt milk out my nose and I think i'm going to be quoting a lot of the lines from this fic for the next few days. Ok that was a lot longer than i intended, but i figured you deserved it since you've kept me entertained for roughly a day and a half while i read . I. I'm gonna go now and read Shiva, and stop wasting your time.
Sl�n go f�ill!
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From ANON - UnknownSource on February 04, 2004
Okay Doke, where to begin? I'll start with boy was that long, and in depth, and filled with so many intricate and interwining plots and subplots that at some points my brain nearly frizzled out completely (though that isnt hard). And i've only gotten through part one of what looo hoo hopefully be the never ending saga. To tell you the truth, i liked that. I'm not into romance, in fact the mere notion of it has made me flee screaming from fics before but i made an exception cause i figured this is like one of the founding stones of XME fanfiction and i'm pretty glad i did. I loved the attention to detail, I am walking away with one hell of a lotta interesting facts i never knew before, which is always a plus. Shows that 1. you like to give your stories detail and 2. you're on your way to becoming a frickin good writer since you're willing to go and research that stuffif yif you already knew this stuff at least you're bothering to include it. Little things like that are touches I like. The main plot of Kitty and Kurt's illfated love was a good one, both characters stayed very true to themselves especially dear Kurt, and my only qualm about their storyline was that you layed on a the judaism theme a little hard. Interesting stuff yes, but maybe you could break it down a little and let it just flow in. No need to have it in chunky style pieces. I think that was my only qualm about the entire story, the rest was excellent. My main love of this story has to be the fact you paid attention to the other characters. This was an all rounder fic, that covered many different aspects and many different characters and just when one part was becoming slightly tideous (not boring just ya know, you wanted to take a break for a moment) there was another character and subplot to take its place. A very hard thing to attempt and a deadly thing to achieve, but you seem to have mastered it nicely. The plots could exist by themselves, but the way that they relied on each other made this fic even more of a gem to read, the story just flowed along with no nasty plotholes or strange jumps in the story telling. Now for writing style, you're a pretty funny writer. The serious bits are good, but i like the way there is always a least one or two little lines that make me spurt milk out my nose and I think i'm going to be quoting a lot of the lines from this fic for the next few days. Ok that was a lot longer than i intended, but i figured you deserved it since you've kept me entertained for roughly a day and a half while i read this. I'm gonna go now and read Shiva, and stop wasting your time.
Sl�n go f�ill!
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From ANON - Piotr_86 on August 04, 2003
This is HUGE ! Took me two days to finish, was like reading a complete novel ! I hereby wanna express my deep respect for your writing skills, Nemain. Heck, there were LOTS of passages in your story that truly kept me to the verye ofe of my chair ! This was an exciting and - above all - beautiful read, full of emotions. Good to know there are people out there in the fandom who take their time and creativity to do something like this.
Greets & two steel thumbs up from the german Colossus,
-- Piotr

PS.: Should ya ever need a translator for English/German in case Foxy doesn't have the time - count on me. :)
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From ANON - Jackie on July 10, 2003
Wow. It took me over a week to read this whole thing, but...wow. On to #2!
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From ANON - Josh on June 25, 2003
This type of writing is the only reason I come to this site. Although it is sometimes fun to see our favorite characters engaged in various sexual situations, it gets boring. Personally I would rather see the characters develop and change when faced with differing problems, and you did this. So thank you for sticking to the story and thank you for making that story interesting!
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From ANON - Jackie on June 22, 2003
Expanding on a footnote because I grew up hearing one of these phrases. Just in case there was any confusion over the phrase "looks like she was ridden hard and put up wet". It is a reference to horses...to put up a horse after a hard ride, or a ride in the rain, while its coat is still wet with sweat or water can make the horse extremely ill, even on a warm night. Want proof? Read "Black Beauty". My favorite book. I'll put in a real review when I finish the story, promise!
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From ANON - dragonz on June 12, 2003
This is a very good story and I can easily tell that you're a very talented writer. I've managed to gather one thing from your story though and that is: You like using cliffhangers a little to much. In every chapter you've managed to end it with a cliff hanger. That's a good tatic because it makes the reader want to jump right into the next part of the story. I've only reached chapter 25 but I'm going to try to get to chapter 28 before I go to sleep tonight!
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From ANON - Darling on May 21, 2003
Hello again. I am impressed with the amount of work that you're putting in this story. You seem to know so much about the characters' personalities, Jewish traditions, etc. I really liked the part when Kurt received the picture of belly dancing Kitty! Lance is so horrible! I can't wait to read more, but I'm going to have to 'cause I got other things to do and what not. I'll probably read this story five chapters at a time, so the next review will probably be for chapter ten. Until next time!
~Darling
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From ANON - Darling on May 14, 2003
This really was beautiful. You've actually got talent compared to others on this site who call themselves writers. I'll be reviewing your story, but I wish to remain anonymous. I love he way you began with friendship and then moved on to flirting after the movie. However, in my opinion, I think they moved way to fast. I'm impressed with the amount of chapters in this story, and I'll be leaving reviews every so oftI doI don't wan these people tracking me down and creating an account for me even if I don't want one.
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From ANON - Summer on May 10, 2003
Gah still great! heh its wonderful how they sneak things around!! IF you couldnt tell i LOVE kitty and Kurrty =^_^= Hai, anywys ill read more soon gomensai for another review so soon.
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From ANON - Summer on May 10, 2003
Im not gonna say how long it took me to read 9 chapters but iwill say this story is beautiful and great i love it and will finish reading it later ^_^ please write more Kurt &Kitty fics kami knows we need more..and hey the comment on your 'american Fottball' ehh we 'Southern' dont mind the insults or whatever we can just say the same exact thing to your..football..XD
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