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Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From Akiramatirkezsanab on May 26, 2019

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  • From ANON - autumngold on October 25, 2015
    I just found your beautiful story and love it! Thank you for giving Harry such a wonderful family and devoted Alpha. I really like how you also gave him a new family in the Avengers. Excellent story!
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  • From ANON - Lexi on October 22, 2015
    Yay! Finally after so long it has finally come to an end. As always, you're writing is wonderful and I definitely loved this ending to such a dramatic love story. It was definitely a good read while it lasted and I'd waited so long for it to end. Thank you for such a wonderful ending to this wonderful story. Definitely loved all the interactions with everyone and how Clint was being a silly doofus about claiming Harry even though they had been together for ten years and Harry already claimed Clint and all that. The dynamic between everyone is as always brilliant. Ever since you mentioned your next Avengers/HP pic being Bruce/Harry I've been totally excited for it so I'm eagerly awaiting the first chapter, and I'll definitely look into the Gen Harry/Tony story as well since you're a fabulous writer. Keep up the amazing work.
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  • From ANON - Madam Coffee Kitty on April 10, 2015
    Though I probably didn't write as many reviews as I should have, you are very welcome. I feel conflicted when any of your stories end; Happy to see it complete, yet sad to see it end. Thank you for all the effort you put into your writing. You did a wonderful job and I greatly enjoyed this story. As always, I look forward to your next new story. I can't wait to begin a new adventure through your words. I wish you good luck, good health, and happy writing.
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  • From ANON - Meechypoo on March 22, 2015
    Oh that was just overly. Harry and Clint have worked out a better schedule for taking care of little Ellis so that they as new parents can still feel like human beings in stead of sleep deprived automatons. But most of all, yay, they had sex...wild uninhibited sex...without the heat, without the guilt and shame and jut let themselves be in love and lust with each other. I will miss them all after the next chapter but it sure has been fun!

    ~~ Meechy
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2015
    That was lovely.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on February 25, 2015
    Loved the chapter!
    I'm glad Harry woke up in this chapter, really hope that he gets better soon, although something tells me that him finding out what Clint did and that he's pregnant might cause him more mental trauma. I hope Harry doesn't hold it against Clint for what he did, this Harry seems like the kind of person to understand that Clint couldn't control himself.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on February 25, 2015
    Loved the chapter!
    While I don't like the idea of Harry being tortured, I like how Harry never gave in to their questions (besides giving his name). :D

    And I can't believe it was Clint that raped Harry! I thought it was going to be one of his tormentors, I never once thought it was going to be Clint!

    We know how Clint is feeling about this, there's no telling how Harry is feeling! Oh, I hope he gets some help for this! I wonder if the others will know what Clint had done.
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  • From Lady_Arachne on February 25, 2015
    Interesting!
    I can't believe I've never read this before, I guess since I never seen any of the Avengers movies it put me off from reading this, but I'm so glad that I started reading this! You have a way of writing crossovers in a way that doesn't confuse the readers! :D
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  • From Jade_Obsession on February 20, 2015
    i just discovered this today, read it all and am obsessed with it already!
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  • From ANON - Constructive Critic on October 27, 2014
    Ok. I got a few simpl complaints here: firstly the dialogue, it needs to b more personalized by whom ever is talking, ie, harrys British polite and formal speech is way different from thors casually ancient formal British accent that would be far from the normal English we speak. Captain Americas speech would be polite but his lower class and decades older upbringing should show in his dialogue as well. Tony, natasha, Clint and Bruce should all speak casually as they r known to do, n formal and informal situations. Second complaint is simply that harrys way too often just referred to as 'the 20yo. Raven hair, boy, youth, man, omega, agent, British, foreigner, all could b used Morgan to describe him indirectly as his age. Sorry for ranting those thing just BUGGED me
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  • From ANON - clarinetchik06 on September 08, 2014
    Starlight,

    I absolutely adore your work. I've been obsessed with "Rise of the Drakens" for ages, and just a few hours ago decided to browse the AFF world that wasn't the HP universe, and stumbled across this. I was captivated, and despite having just been looking for something to read while waiting to find out if my fiance was coming home tonight, and being exhausted before I even started, I absolutely couldn't go to sleep until I was caught up. Just like with "Rise," I was enthralled from the first sentence, and I'm eagerly awaiting more! (Don't worry, I'm incredibly patient... I understand how busy RL & writing multiple fics can get, so you shall hear no harping on updating from me :P ) I'm continually impressed by the quality of your work. Everything is well thought out, your plots are all fascinating and intense, but they all make sense. Things don't just happen with absolutely no explanation or logic, which drives me nuts in some of the other fics I read. I've only ever noticed a small handful of typos, and considering the sheer number of chapters of "Rise," that's saying something, because I can be REALLY critical, even if I don't voice it. The fact that you continue to put out such excellent work while simultaneously writing multiple stories for multiple fandoms is impressive, and I'll happily wait as long as it takes between chapters. You should be commended for your skills as a writer and a storyteller.

    Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - RM on July 16, 2014
    This issue to correct my previous review.

    It was supposed to say sorry for the loss of your granddad. I don't even know how the other word got in there except for the keyboard thinking for me???? Anyways I am really sorry for your loss.
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  • From ANON - RM on July 16, 2014
    Let me first start off saying that I absolutely love your writing! I think if you come up with original characters you could be published.

    That being said it is so frustrating reading your works because you seem a to get sick of them and abandon them even though you promise to finish them. Even if you have every intention of finishing them at some point in your life doesn't count. I read "The Life and Times of Harry James Potter-Malfoy thinking it would be done because it hasn't been updated in years. I would have never read it if ii knew you ddidnt finish the story. I don't think you will finish "Rise of the Darckens."

    I realize you do this for fun and don't get paid, but I hope you can see how frustrating it is on the readers part when you start a new story and quit updating one that we love and are wrapped up in. You get mad when people want you to update and are not patient, but I think you should take it as a compliment. They read your writing and so look forward to escaping in your stories. That being said I don't think there is any excuse to be rude to you.

    I don't even know if you will read this, but I am sorry for the loss of your grandam.granddad. it sucks and the only thing that truly helps is time.

    Now I am begging for you to finish, "Rise of the Drackens", "The Life and Trials...", and "Damaged Bodies..." PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!!!

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  • From ANON - Madam Coffee Kitty on July 13, 2014
    I loved this chapter. Lots of lovey-doveyness and great suspense at the end. I am enjoying reading Harry and Clint's relationship develop. I would also recommend the Alpha Reeducation Program to the other alphas as well, lol. I am glad to see this chapter posted and I wish you good luck, good health, and happy writing.
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