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By : marvelmaster616
  • From ANON - Agent-G on December 30, 2005
    Chapter 4

    Well that breakup with Jean was long time in coming. Although you got to feel bad for Taryn, you know this would have all been easier if you just had Scott single to begin with. Cause now that Jean is going to seduce Scott right after his breakup...well...she's kind of a slut now that she would do that. I mean what kind of girl tried to sleep with a guy after he had his heart broken? I mean at least make her wait a bit and let Scott get over it a bit. You know Taryn wouldn't go out and sleep with the first person she saw.
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on December 30, 2005
    Part Four

    I liked the breaking-up scenes. I liked specially how you linked them, making Jean's breaking-up provoked Scott's one. So it didn't seem casual or forceful.

    Besides, you handled nicely both. The screaming contest Jean got, the splitting between Scott and Taryn due to the weaknesses in their relationship...

    Heh. I can't wait for the next part, with Jean playing the temptress.
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  • From ANON - x00001 on December 30, 2005
    great chapter i liked the break up scenes
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  • From ANON - TwistedAngel on December 22, 2005
    Interesting idea. I'm a Scott/Kitty shipper, but your story intrigues me. Makes you wonder if maybe *that's* why Jean's so uptight. One little criticism, though, just a small one. You have far FAR too many elipses (...) throughout the story. They make it a bit stuttering, and kept pulling my attention away from the story. Other than that, it's wonderful and I can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Wen on December 21, 2005
    Still a lot of funny part, can't wait to read the continuation.
    I don't think Duncan will take the break up well, but for the other thing I think she won't have to ask Scott, he's in the same state, if they are in the same room alone, they will jump on each other lol
    And lol, woman aren't fountains, soaked towel seem a little too much she was lucky nobody heard her lol
    carry on
    JOTT FOREVER
    Wen
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  • From Jenskott on December 19, 2005
    Geez, if I don't know better, I'd think you like torturing Jean. ^_^

    Poor girl. Do her dumping Duncan and ensnaring Scott, you damned tease! :D
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  • From ANON - x00001 on December 19, 2005
    great chapter man can't wait to see what scott and jea are going to do next
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  • From ANON - alrischa on December 18, 2005
    Yay! They're finally gonna do it! I can't get enough of smut, post the next chapter soon! :D
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on December 18, 2005
    Chapter 3

    well that was a nice leadup chatper and solo act for Jean. I do hope you handle the Tayran thing well at least but I guess Jean really can't take it anymore. This should be interesting to see how it goes.
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  • From ANON - otak the canadian on December 12, 2005
    I really enjoy your story and look forward to your next chapter. just out of curiosity will you have any other couples in this story? I think Kurt and Kitty would really enjoy a " friends with benefits" arrangement(sorry, I'm a nut for Kurtty stories even if it's periferal and I think both of their conversations with Ororo (or KUrt's with LOgan?)would be Funny ) Anyways I really enjoy this so I'll keep reading.

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  • From ANON - x00001 on December 12, 2005
    great chapter
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  • From ANON - alrischa on December 11, 2005
    Poor Scott and Jean! You torture them too much! Get them both into bed, pronto! :p
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  • From ANON - Jenskott on December 11, 2005

    Other beautiful chapter. I can see the sexual tension is wearing down theirs nerves. They really need some help.

    I loved Jean went to the older, wiser and mroe experienced female role model she had in the house. Pretty logical since she couldn't ask her mother.

    I hope they dump theirs dates soon.

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  • From ANON - wen on December 11, 2005
    oh man, how could she talk to Ororo so easily about that, and Ororo lol
    Jean is about to rape Scott rigth here, the day they'll kiss they'll go to the next step immediatelly lol
    carry on
    Wen
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  • From ANON - Agent-G on December 11, 2005
    Well that was a very interesting chapter and I really liked that talk there with Ororo at the end. Well if Jean wants the friend with benifits she'll have to dump duncan now considering even doing that would still be cheating and after the week she's had that shouldn't be too much of a problem. Although I guess before she adn Scott can try it out he'll have to do the same with Taryn although wouldn't it be a bit hyporicital to dump her sleep with another women just like that (even if it is Jean) especially since he said he wasn't ready for that kind of thing?
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