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Reviews for The Rogue, The Rat, The Demon, and The Cat

By : WhiteOrchid886
  • From ANON - WitchKing on May 06, 2005
    Holy Hell!! Once again White-Orchid you have outdone yourself. Anouther great chapter filled with passion, longing, outright lust, anger, fear, happiness, and even a squad of snoring Jamies. Matilda is once again the source of most of my amusment. From changing clothes to booting the God of Bad Timing out of her hair, she seems to add a whole new look to the world of Evolution. I would have to say that this is a great chapter in a line of already great chapters. Kudos for the use of Invader ZIM,(Ride the pig, Gir! Ride the Pig.) Spirited Away, and several good books, Grendal and Turn the Screw.

    By the way I didn't get to sleep this morning until 6a.m. because of the wonderful story I was reading. It was worth the lack of sleep just to read this chapter. And I would gladly do it again when the next chapter is done. So once again I stand and cheer for White-Orchid and her muses. Yahh, WOo hoo, Yippee, etc, etc.....
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  • From ANON - ???? on May 06, 2005
    Oh man that was another wicked chapter please write more espiecially about kitty and kurt and i cant wait to read your next chapter
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  • From ANON - vasdrkangel on May 05, 2005
    To answer your question, Yes I love the Story. It is extreamly well written. Keep up the Great work. Can't wait to read more, soon.
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  • From ANON - ???? on May 05, 2005
    Holy shit man that was a good story so dont stop there please keep going and write about their survival trip wow that was honestly one of the best stories i have ever read your great man keep it up


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  • From ANON - Un on April 29, 2005
    Sorry for the second review, I just got done reading the whole thing. The first review was written just after
    that hilarious part, and I was so excited to say something that I went right here, lmao. Not trying to spam
    or anything.

    So...A more in-depth review. As I've said, your character has a very likable personality. I do believe she's
    said some of the best lines I've ever seen on here =). The story was a joy to read, especially the naughty
    bits, hehe. The fruit idea still has me in a gleeful mood, it was so much fun. There -is- one thing that's in
    the negative, but just the one. See, large sizes for guys is very, very common on AFF. Seeing a repeat put
    me off a bit. Remy I could understand, but Kurt has such a lean build in the Evolution show I'd think he'd be
    more towards average. They don't have to be gigantic to be sexy =>. Just keep that in mind if you're wanting
    to write future stories. I'm probably not the only one bothered by these sorts of typical things.

    So, in all, I loved the story. Update soon. =D
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  • From ANON - Un on April 28, 2005
    "Logan in a thong".

    Good god, I probably laughed for ten minutes on that single little phrase. Very awesome story, very well written. Your character is quite likeable, especially her sense of humor. =)
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  • From ANON - Picco on April 25, 2005
    I bow to you! Not only is there decent plot connecting all the good stuff, but the smuttiness gets better every time! ;-; That's hard to find. Thank goodness your plot promises several more chapters.
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  • From ANON - gorilla monsoon on April 09, 2005
    This story is absolutely wonderful. It is well written, the story itself is engrossing, and yet there is plenty of lemony goodness to go around. keep writting!
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  • From ANON - Abril on March 20, 2005
    This was a very long awesome update.

    You had me blushing, and squealing with delight. The Passion fruit was genius. Very hot and I very funny, so so hot!!! Can't wait for the next update. Got to love the Cajun, that would have been a sight to see. :)

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  • From ANON - catey on March 14, 2005
    mmm, this is the best romy fiction I think I have ever read on this site!!!! I can't wait for chapter 4 to come.
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  • From ANON - me on February 22, 2005
    Thankyou for writing such a great fic, this is one of the best stories I have read on this site! It's got plot, humour and sexiness without it being too smutty or pointless "lets just get them to bonk". When's the next chapter coming? I can't wait to read it.
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  • From CajunBelle on February 18, 2005
    cute, creative, funny and sexy- I love it!!! Is there gonna be more?
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  • From ANON - ILURVFlake on February 14, 2005
    EXCELLENT STORY!!! CONTINUE, CONTINUE, CONTINUE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - vasdrkangel on February 14, 2005
    LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. LOVE IT. More please ( Big Smile with puppy eyes) PLEASE!!!!!
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  • From Loreley on February 11, 2005
    For CH3
    First, in response to your note, I love Matilda. She's noticeable but not overpowering, like a good narrator ought to be, and she brings her own sense of humor and views to the story.
    As for the chapter:
    Poor boys, both of them are getting spurned, although in Kurt's case he sort of deserved it since he did violate Kitty's trust. I don't recall an explicit agreement for silence, but hell, she stopped when she first saw him watching her, that certainly implies she wouldn't want everyone else to know! Whe Kurt first went into the kitchen, I thought the awkwardness was great, especially with Rogue trying to disappear into the background. Matilda's little side notes were hilarious. I love how when Kitty is mad at Kurt, she can't bring herself to be completely mean to him or to ignore him. Can you say crush, at the very least? When Remy burst in with that whole "highlight of Kurt's life" bit on Kurt's behalf, I laughed until my stomach hurt. The wonderful timing of a handsome (but sometimes brainless) man...just priceless. And as for Rogue, when Kitty started describing what the other girl had been doing in her sleep and Rogue shamelessly switched the topic back to Kurt's blunder, that was so sneaky, and great! And Kurt is so willing to grovel for Kitty when he's normally so strong and self reliant about everything else, I just love him (swoons). It was also sweet of Remy to aprroach Rogue with caution...well, as much as he could be expected to use. Of course she had to bring up the 'friends' line, as if that'll work when they both want each other! I have to admit, for 5 seconds the fruit thing was confusing, how they all touched it but never actually ate it, until the other people showed up to eat the fruit and everything beCAME clear. The sspontaneous comustion and release scenes were great: naughty, fun and yummy all at once. Very sexy. Kitty's thoughts on Kurt's angelic eyes were sweet, if he knew what she thought of them he'd just die of joy I'm sure. Rogue seems to have an equal infatuation with Remy's eyes. The part where both girls couldn't resist looking at their boys' johnsons and then having the same thought was funny, I know I'd have to look if I had the chance! I have to reiterate about Matilda's humor: wicked! Especially during the 'release' scenes. Old faithful...(grins). Rogue's thoughts were poignant as always, I hope she gets to be happy in this story! When both couples got caught, I was sure they'd be dead! I laughed at how Kitty was straddling Kurt when Tabitha came in and said it wasn't what it looked like. Truth can be hilarious at times. And as for Scott, he must be punished! (chases Scott around with a whip) I was taken aback when Remy told Rogue that Scott has a thing for her, but it wouldn't completeley surprise me, though I'm well aware he loves Jean. Just another reason for the two men to dislike each other. The mock trial was great, I don't know what was funnier: when Wolverine was describing what he did and didn't smell in their rooms, or when Charles had a difficult time even admitting something sexual had occurred! Classic. And when the two girls went to their room to pack and ended up spilling their guts to each other, wouldn't the guys just die if they heard what the girls were discussing? That, or they'd get swelled heads (of a different kind) and strut around like insufferable asses. Anyway, Matilda's walking a fine line, everyone's getting suspicious and I wonder how long it'll be before Professor X catches her...Update soon!
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