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Reviews for The Rogue, The Rat, The Demon, and The Cat

By : WhiteOrchid886
  • From Loreley on February 11, 2005
    For CH2
    First of all, this story has a plot AND a touch of sex so far, congrats to you. Rare is the writer who can balance the two (I sure know I can't!). I enjoy Matilda's thoughts, they are humorous and in tune with the characters, but also detached. It's a fun perspective. Something really needs to be done about Scott, Jean needs to soften him up a bit (I know she's high handed, but she is a woman, after all). Matilda's thoughts on Scott were close to my own opinion of him. Good leader, but far too uptight! You do a good job of staying true to the nature of the characters: Remy's rebellious and headstrong streak, Rogue's deliberate distance, Kitty's kind yet volatile ways, and Kurt's humor and blind adoration of Kitty. Nicely done. And it's also fun to see how Matilda can pull their strings and have them react to her suggestions. I wonder how much command she actually has, what all she could convince them to do...? Her sense of humor is wicked, love it. I almost laughed my ass off when she wondered what movie Remy would pick and hoped it wasn't Showgirls. I was surprised Kitty danced for Kurt, that just proves how much she trusts him. And once again: something needs to be done about SCOTT! Altough I have to admit it was funny reading his disappointment over the secret Kurt had to tell him, I think he expected to hear that Kitty HAD given him a lap dance. The gossip spreading bit was great, too, that's about how fast the stuff seems to fly around when someone's got juicy news. I had hoped Remy would lay one on Rogue, but I'm sure that'll happen eventually. I can be patient...I almost died when Jamie asked Kitty what a strip tease was, and she can belly dance? That's cool! The dreams they had were interesting, especially Kurt's, poor tormented soul. What on earth does Matilda have in mind for them? Passion fruit?? And does the good Professor know she's there???
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  • From Loreley on February 11, 2005
    For CH1
    Interesting beginning. The four first sounded like guardian angels, but with one of them being only 2,000+, I think they're something else...guardian spirits? Hirane was mentioned and dismissed quickly, but I have to wonder if it's not going to be more of a problem then the guardians are expecting. The sense of humor in this chapter is quirky, what will this Matilda put the clueless couples through?

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  • From ANON - Anastasia on February 08, 2005
    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU UPDATED!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! Matilda is great!!! I have always hated original characters, but Matilda is WICKED! The only OC I´ll probably ever like. In a scence she is there but not really there but... she´s there.....so she isn´t disrupting but she is....She´s in the fic but not really.....(I am totally not getting the point to you....) What I´m trying to say is that she is written perfectly.

    I love the Romy!!!! the Kurtty is great too! I swear in this chapter you got me sad at the little fit wit Rogue and Remy, almost falling of the chair from laughter and blushing at the obvious!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! It´s the best!!!!!! I hope to see more soon!! The mixture of sex and plot is great!!!

    Lot´s of hugs, take care!!!
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  • From ANON - IvyZoe on February 08, 2005
    OMG!!!
    This chapter had me rolling on the floor laughing! I loved it!
    I can't believe that that happened to poor Rogue and kitty! I don't feel so bad for the boys because, well, their boys....it's not the same.
    I really hope that Rogue opens up to Remy soon. One question though....if Rogue found all those condoms in his wallet, and all those phone numbers then obviously he is going around with other women. Is he going to explain that to her...because it is kinda wrong for him to do that, especially if he claims that he wants Rogue and Rogue only!
    Other than that I really loved it! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - WitchKing on February 08, 2005
    Well Hot dam!! You did it again. A great chapter. I still love how the Matilda character plays them all like puppets on strings. Keep up the great story. Oh by the way the steaming hot sex is great too. Hope to read more of your story soon.

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  • From ANON - jason weaver on February 07, 2005
    I just wanted to let you know that I am enjoying your story immenselyand hope that you will continue it. I also really think Matilda is an excellent character yours truly, jason weaver
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  • From ANON - Anastasia on February 05, 2005
    BUENISIMO!!!! ESPECTACULAR!!!!! THIS IS REALLY GOOD!!! i CAN´T WAIT TILL YOU UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - WitchKing on January 27, 2005
    I am very pleased to say that your work is great! Some of the best stuff I have read here at Adult fan fiction. Most stories are of the more sex less plot kind. But you tell a great story and keeps the action going. I can't wait to read more of this story. Keep up the great work.
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