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Reviews for Festival of X

By : marvelmaster616
  • From Daye on July 14, 2012
    OK, Remy gets a failing grade in biology. Women do not have prostates. Like he seems to imply.

    Though i like Jubilee I much preferred the first couple of scenes to this fic. Also Remy, randomly inserting french words into your speech still makes sound like a jackass to me. But that's canon and i shouldn't complain.
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  • From AgentGv01 on July 13, 2012
    Well like always enjoyed the chapter, I think I liked the Scott/Amara scene the best out of the three that were shown. I was surprised by all the toys used in the last one, don't remember you trying something like that before. Although I'm kind of surprised that this place would even have modern showers, I always thought that Nova Roma was more behind in technology than the rest of the world.I never seen it in the comics so I'm not sure if this is accurate of the place or not.

    I am looking forward to the next one as I got a hint on what will happen in that.
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  • From DrunkenScotsman on July 13, 2012
    Just finished reading the latest installment. I very much enjoyed Scott/Amara and Remy/Jubes. The image of Amara superheating her fresh-from-the-pool self to dry off and emerge in a cloud of steam was simultaneously sexy and funny as hell - which is totally okay, since sex can be funny as well as fun. Also, I'm glad my suggested revision - about giving the group an opportunity to opt-out - provided a conversation-starter for Scott and Amara.

    The Remy/Jubes section was interesting because it was unique, what with the use of the toys and such. In a lot of stories, the progression is usually "thinks about doing anal" or "expresses curiosity about anal" > "immediately tries it with ridiculously oversized partner"; here, though, Jubilee eases into it by trying a smaller toy first without jumping straight to having Remy ream her raw. Though what you're writing is more hardcore porn, I like little touches like these.
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  • From MarvelFan98 on June 20, 2012
    Wow! It took me a while to get around to reading this chapter but it was amazing. The rogue section was probably one of the best in the entire story. And i don't usually like Jean but you wrote her very well in this chapter. Can't wait to read more, in particular finding out what the Cuckoos are up to. Keep up the great work.
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  • From Daye on June 09, 2012
    Just finished reading it. Some nice stuff there, i like the character work you did with Bobby and Jean before they're bout and Laura is great too. Not sure about her being the instigator but every since i read agent-g's sex ed. i wanted to see a bit where Alex got her to try something new and treated her like a girl he was making love to rather than fucking like animals.

    So decent chapter, really wondering what you're going to come up with next. Random nitpick, if Amara's part of a novo roma thing. why are the names of the god and legendary figures and things the greek versions instead of the roman ones? Aphrodite and Ares instead of Venus and Mars?
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  • From Royboy on June 09, 2012
    I liked once again seeing Laura in action. I really liked the innovation of the T-job. But I LOVED Rogue's DP and facial. Attagirl Rogue. Fucking like a champ!

    And are we going to get an update on the Cuckoos and their mischief soon?
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  • From AgentGv01 on June 08, 2012
    Well for Chapter 7 I liked the first and last parts the best. It was nice to have Jean and Bobby as he was the only one of the original team that never did make a pass at Jean so this was a nice one. I also liked how you used some of his powers in this, I felt you could have done a few more things, like trailing it over more sensual spots like the spine and stuff but over all it was nicely done.

    I see you also have Rogue starting to branch out although given that she's never done anal before maybe a bit more discomfort for a bit as she got used to it might have helped but then maybe she's a natural at it (some are and some can't do it after all). I also hope this is a set up for that major one that we talked about having Amara bring in some help for Rogue to really let loose.

    The X-23 and Prodigy thing...I don't know. I'm pretty sure his powers only work on living people he can't absorb knowledge or skills from inanimate objects so it really didn't make any sense to me why she thought he would be good for it with his mimic abilities. In fact his powers should have reflected on her given she was in his range I think. So it all felt a little off from the start of the scene between them at least it did for me so I kind of skipped it.
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  • From ANON - Xfan232 on June 08, 2012
    Great chapter. I find it interesting that you have the thread going of Warren being a little more cautious then most. He seemed reluctant with Emma to give in fully and again here with Rogue. Even though it's a classic pairing I'd like to see a Betsy/Warren scene where she finally gets him to cut loose a bit. Since he loves and trusts her it would make the most sense that she could bring that out of him.
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  • From Ragnarok on May 13, 2012

    Great, great story.

    First of all the premise is great, and I think it fits with the X-Men, a group which, unlike the Avengers, has always been pretty sexual and, at times, pretty libidinous.

    Second of all, I like the characters involved. It chooses to stick with Jean Grey (someone we don't see in ages in the comics) aswell as some New X-Men (Noriko, Julian) aswell as some of their development that has recently erased and ditched in comics for random reasons (like the romance betwen Julian and Laura). I like the depiction of the characters, and I love how the scenes are described. Very creative scenarios and pretty hot sex scenes make this worth reading.
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  • From Royboy on May 09, 2012
    Great new chapter. I liked the Betsy/Noriko/Logan scene and LOVED the Kitty/James scene. I do think that too big of a deal was made about her petite frame and his huge dick. I mean, obviously Kitty could handle it, and it's not like there's never been instances in history of daintier girls getting fucked by large cocks, especially in the porn industry.
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  • From Daye on May 07, 2012
    Jubilee's going to pissed if she find out Wolverine was hankering for asians and didn't ask her...

    Kurt and Ororo are probably my favourite pairing out of this batch. But I still think your character often get a bit too chatty during sex. Just a personal preference.

    Kitty/Warpath wins 'randomest pairing' but you justified it well enough. And it was a decent anal scene. Again lots of talking but Warpath's concerns made sense.
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  • From AgentGv01 on May 07, 2012
    Well I see that you're starting to experiment a bit more with the various characters such as a threesome with Betsy and Surge was a nice touch I hadn't thought of before. I did enjoy that Kurt and Ororo it was more sexual and not just some kind of animal fuck or something, I think what you did with them worked for the best. I hope to see some other things like this when they take their time to really explore each other. Didn't expect Kitty getting into anal though or into huge guys that are built but then you never know with some people.

    I do wonder what you'll have next although I think I have an idea from that one with Rogue was hinted at so if its what I think I can't wait.
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  • From Royboy on April 11, 2012
    Awesome, awesome chapter. Super hot group action and I cannot wait to see what those naughty Cuckoos have planned.
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  • From MarvelFan98 on April 05, 2012
    Great new chapter.

    I loved both scenes, especially the one with Emma. It was interesting to see her in different type of role then usual. And I can't wait to see what the Cuckoos have planned.

    Keep up the great work.
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  • From Daye on April 05, 2012
    Wow. Gambit's an asshole. Though Storm/Gambit is a nice pairing. Not so keen on the Emma Frost scene. But that could be because its Emma Frost.

    Hmm. Now what are the Cuckoos up to sneaking out to Nova Roma to get in on the action or just mentally influencing the mansion to spawn an orgy there? Only time will tell.
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