Click Here!

Reviews for Grey Frost

By : marvelmaster616
  • From Lightning on June 20, 2007
    great chapter if you asked me Emma seemed jealous about Jean been scott's best friend, any way can't wait to find out what happens next now that deadpool has been called in by shaw i hope no one gets killed can't wait to find out keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From on June 13, 2007
    You know I think you handled this scene well, it's not always the best for the first time and I think you showed that pretty good. You got both characters off but you also showed their different tastes in sex and how that can complicate things. Normally a couple would talk things out but I guess Duncan isn't the type for that. Although there will still be rumors at school since everyone knew they were going to sleep together and then they break up the next day? Everyone will put two and two together but I think both won't say what happened.

    Although I bet Jean could at least tell Emma how things went.
    Report Review

  • From Lightning on June 13, 2007
    great chapter i'm glad jean broke up with duncan they were just wrog for each other anyway can't wait to see what the others think keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From on June 06, 2007
    I think the hellfire scene really adds a bit of foreshadowing to help pick up the intensity of the story and shows that they weren't just a simple plot device to get the story started. I liked how Emma and Scott talked things out, although the actual sex scene was oddly short given how you usual write it, didn't even mention how they got out of the clothing and stuff. But other then that it was a good chapter, you showed Jean wanted to experience a bit more out of life, plus Kitty is one to talk given who she is seeing lol.
    Report Review

  • From Lightning on June 06, 2007
    great chapter does jean know what she is really doing? can't wait to see what happens when shaw discovers where Emma is keep up the good work.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Kurama on May 20, 2007
    Is it too much to hope for that things between Jean and the jer... uh, I mean jock, Duncan don't go any further than lite petting. I know its selfish, considering Scott and Emma have had a lot of fun together. However, I'm really hoping for an Emma/Scott/Jean thing to start up; after all, she and Jean seem to be getting pretty familiar with each other. At times I wonder if this turn into a Jean/Emma story, with both Scott and Duncan being left out in the cold. However, its obvious both women want him, and he returns those feelings, its just his moral upbringing might not let him go to that point. That being the case, then I think its up to two telepathic mutants femmes to see the error of his ways.
    Keep up the great story, I can't wait to see what'll happen next.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jott Summers on May 18, 2007
    hi Slickboy! Really nice story, but keep it coming after chapter 9, I wanna see JOTT! Lovely twist, though...
    Report Review

  • From on May 17, 2007
    nice update there although I'm hoping that Scott and Emma will open up I mean after all this time I think they should. Also now I kind of see Scott as a bit of an asshole thinking of another woman while having sex with his girlfriend I know that it wasn't really his fault and all and I'm surprised Jean and Scott even have that mental bond especially that strong since I don't think it was no where near that level in the show at this point. Still I feel like Emma was 'cheated' on in a way and that's kind of not fair given her crappy life.

    I do like that Jean and Emma are a bit closer but something like this can easily destroy that relationship as Emma is one that doesn't forgive easy.

    I wonder if after this Jean will go all the way with Duncan now, it seems like the next logical step since she's experienced what sex can feel like so maybe she'd want to try it out for real and it's not like she can go up to Scott either that's not her style to go after another girl's especially a friend's boyfriend.
    Report Review

  • From Lightning on May 16, 2007
    great chapter i thought for minute there scott and emma were going to get seen by everyone had me fooled can't wait to see what happens next between them.
    Report Review

  • From on May 09, 2007
    I see you're letting Jean get a bit more less uptight and I wonder what she'll do with Duncan next, personally I would like to see her work her way up to a few sex scenes with him (yeah he's not my fav guy in the world but it is bound to happen and hey Scott lost his cherry to another woman it's only fair Jean does the same)

    And I see Emma is appriciating Scott there although I do wonder if things will get more open between the two but it is still early in their relationship after all.
    Report Review

  • From Lightning on May 09, 2007
    great chapter i liked the end bit with jean she seems to have taken in what emma told her keep up the good work
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jenskott on May 05, 2007
    Chapter 7

    As much for Scott ordering them shutting up... The New Mutants can't stop themselves from getting their noses where they don't belong.

    And it's right what Jean doesn't need. Shes trying fixing her own mess, and they don't let her one minute to relax.

    And meanwhile, Scott having sex. Life must have some perks, despite all.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jenskott on May 05, 2007
    Chapter 6

    Ouch. Jean is suffering and poor Scott is clueless. Of course, she can't give him some clue. But it doesn't stop her feelings. I wonder what and how long it'll take until her frustration explodes.

    Breakfast in the mansion is a riot. I wonder how Scott canc ope with so many pestering, loud-mouthed teenagers. Nonetheless, I was laughing when he told: "Now you have been debriefed, so shut the Hell up!".

    Innnnteresting conversation between Jean and Emma. Pretty arousing, too. It's nice, though, that Emma understands Jean's sexual activity is nobody's business, including her.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jenskott on May 05, 2007
    Chapter 5

    Oh, my. That was a good end to a date.

    The aftermath of it... Not so great. Now Jean is hurt and distraught, and the worst thing is she can't do anything about it.

    I'm almost fearing how both talks will go.
    Report Review

  • From on May 02, 2007
    chapter 7

    Well that certainly was an interesting little chapter, and I can see Emma teaching Scott what she knows, mainly a sex chapter but a good one at least I do wonder what she'll teach him next time and will she also give Jean a bit more pointers? What of the others is there going to be anymore subplots in this?
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!