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Reviews for Grey Frost

By : marvelmaster616
  • From on August 09, 2007
    Well that was a great battle there and a nice way to end the 2/3 mark (or close to it) to this story. I think you pretty much did a really good chapter here and I liked a few of the fights you but in there as well. Can't wait for the aftermath when both Jean and Emma have to deal with the events and all that happened. Plus as you showned Emma knows the real truth behind Jean and Scott as well.Plus with the ending we had talked about makes sense since the Hellfire Club memebers although beaten are still alive and could come back one day as well.
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  • From Lightning on August 08, 2007
    great chapter loved the way scott rescued jean. so selene got a taste of her own drug that was good. i can't wait to see what happens between scott and emma now keep up the good work.
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  • From Lightning on August 01, 2007
    Great chapter i liked the way you ended it there Emma has now got a real fight on her hands but what about Jean i know Jean won't kill in cold blood but if she doesn't there is not telling what selene will do. can't wait to find out if the others managed to rescue them in time before its too late keep up the good work.
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  • From on August 01, 2007
    Well you certainly got the girls in a tight spot. I thought Jean would have to punish/rape that girl as a sign of loyalty but killer her was definately amping it up. But I get the feeling Jean is going to at the last moment use that dagger on Selene. As for Emma she's got a mental battle but I know for a fact that she's stronger then Mastermind so she'll kick him out after she pushes as hard as she can with her mind.

    Maybe even sending his powers back at him as well or redirects his focus into Shaw's head. But the rescue is on the way and I see a big battle for the next chapter.
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  • From on July 25, 2007
    Nice update man, and that was a nice plan for Jean I bet no one would have seen that coming, although I bet when asked what happened to them they 'll just make something up about being locked up whenever someone asks. Although I get the feeling Scott will get the full story if just to help them deal with what happened to them, since Emma would get over this a lot easier then Jean.

    Anyway great time for an update and I can't wait to see the break out for the next chapter.
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  • From Lightning on July 25, 2007
    great chapter i thought Jean was gone you had me fooled anyway can't wait to see what happens next now that jean and Emma both have got there powers back i bet its going to be a real big struggle from now for the both of them. althought i think that if the xmen do rescue them something is going to go wrong. Keep up the good work.
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  • From Lightning on July 18, 2007
    great chapter i feel sorry for Jean having to feel the effects of that drug again and so soon. I liked the idea of forcing emma to watch all that and what she was going through her self can't wait to find out what happens next to both of them.
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  • From on July 18, 2007
    Well that certainly was an intense scene there with Emma and Jean but from a way of breaking them down I can see it being very effective. A few more of those types of sessions and Jean wouldn't last, Emma would take longer to break of course given she's been through this before but I can see that chair taking her down a notch in resistance.

    You know I think that was the best you ever did of Deadpool so far, that was great with him in there. And I nearly laughed out loud with the 'aren't you too young to be in a bar' line that was just perfect timing there.
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  • From on July 12, 2007
    Chapter 15

    Well that was a nice update, we saw a bit of what Scott and Logan were up to and the Shaw/Emma scene was interesting to see as well. I do wonder how he will start to break the girls down even more in the next few chapters and how long they can hold out as well. And you finally got that Emma/Jean scene in there sure it was only one way but I think you could fit in one with both girls going at it which should be awesome to see lol. Keep it up I can't wait for the next one.
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  • From Lightning on July 11, 2007
    Great chapter Jean seems to be struggling still with the effect of the drug that Selene gave her. Are we going to see a flash back of what Emma went through cause all we read is she went through this and that without no real scenes of what she went through and how much pain she went through back then, anyway can’t what to see what you put what happens next.
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  • From Lightning on July 04, 2007
    great chapter some scenes remined me of yours and AgentG story hellfire and brimstone. Any way i feel sorry for Jean going through all that against her will. Can't wait to see what Shaw has installed for Emma keep up the good work.
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  • From on July 04, 2007
    Chapter 14

    Well things have certainly gotten darker for them all haven't they? I did expect a bit more of a fight with Jean trying to fight off the chemicals but I'm guessing after it wears off is when she really starts to feel the violation of being forced to do what she did. Even if it wasn't her fault at all. And I do wonder what Shaw has in story for Emma too. Should be interesting to see what the next few chapters are and how the girls hold out since it will take time to find them.
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  • From on June 27, 2007
    nice little fight scene here and I really think you got deadpool just right in this chapter, I can't wait for his other little appearances that's for sure and for the next chapter since this story is really getting interesting now with the Hellfire back in the mix.
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  • From Lightning on June 27, 2007
    great chapter loved the scene when Shaw was talking to Deadpool that was funny. i liked the fight that Emma and Jean had against Deadpool i thought the xmen would have heard them fighting when the first gernade went off any way can't wait to see how Emma and Jean get out of the Hellfire club keep up the good work.
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  • From on June 20, 2007
    Very tense moments you put there with Jean and Emma but I'm glad you did it in a way that they weren't yelling at each other and hating each other, your way I think was the most realitic thing that would have happened in a moment like that. I can't wait to see Deadpool next chapter that is always good to see him. I take it with what Scott said Emma and Jean will have a little talk to smooth things out away from the mansion and that's when a certain Merc enters.
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