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  • From ANON - Hornet on January 26, 2006
    THis is awesome work. I think Jean did it because I dont like her in this story. What a cliffieI love this so much and I don't read X-Men that often but I love your work Dude Rhayn KEep going with this and keepwriting Cold War
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  • From ANON - RainStorm on January 18, 2006
    Thank you, Thank you, Thank you, for finally updating. I have been waiting for what seems like forever. As usuall, I don't have a bad thing to say. Please keep up the good work. It is a joy to read this.
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  • From ANON - Spider on January 18, 2006
    Wooo doggie I don't know who would do that but i'll takea guess that it was Jubilee. i know that no one else will say that but i will. EXcellent chappie Dude Love this fic. Keep going
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  • From ANON - Lorna on January 17, 2006
    AWESOME CLIFFIE I think Logan did it because he wants Ororo's attention and he can help rebuild the green house and because he's crazy. This was Awesome keep going I'm waiting
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  • From ANON - Kraven on January 17, 2006
    WHAT!!! I think JEan blew it up because she is a bitch. LOL This is masterful and sexy Scott is back and wants to hurt people. I can't wait to find out who did this kept going Rhayn I LOVE THIS
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  • From ANON - Artwzrd7 on January 17, 2006
    Whoah! I've checked back into your fic and Blam! Scott has taken over with fire no less. I wish I was her...SIZZLING under ol' Scooter's attentions! I've been introduced to his hottness before, but I love the fact that he is no wimp in this fic as others make him out to be. Did I mention you make him SIZZLE hottness!
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  • From ANON - Teran on January 03, 2006
    whoa. That took a fast turn. I usually adore Rolo, but I'm hoping Ororo smacks the fool out of Logan.
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on January 02, 2006
    Game Time! Now it starts the bleeding and cursing and fighting for attention. Logan is taking this serious isn't he I guess he wants what he wants. Great chapter I want more hurry up this time.
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  • From ANON - Kraven on January 02, 2006
    OHHHHH Logan's playing dangerous and crazy like. I wonder what the others are going to do to keep SCott from Ororo. i cant wait update quickly Please
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  • From ANON - Jamie B. on January 02, 2006
    This is fabulous!! I've been checking on this story since the last update and I'm glad that you have. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Spider on January 02, 2006
    Dirty pool Logan . The plotting has begun . Logan's getting kind of devious Cool keep going like you are Rabbit don't change a thing great Chapter.
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  • From ANON - Teran on December 30, 2005
    I'm still holding onto some disbelief, but I'm going to trust your decisions. I'm sure everything will make sense as the story continues.
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  • From ANON - Rhayn on December 24, 2005
    They had sex four times . Four times. somebody's gonna pass out so i decided it would be Ororo since she's new at it. I know she controls the weather and all but it was four times. My Scott is not flabby wimpy Scott and he hasn't had sex in a year a whole year and they combusted and someone passed out. Sorry for the confusion :) Rhayn
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  • From ANON - Teran on December 24, 2005
    I'm a little confused. Scott and Logan were talking about Ororo like she wasn't in the room. And then I sort of understood that Scott had screwed her unconscious (?) which is, even for someone as unexperienced as the Ororo in this story, very unlikely, especially from someone who controls the weather. I mean I'd barely say that Victor or Logan could do that, but Scott? I just can't believe that.
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  • From ANON - Kraven on December 23, 2005
    You must continue withthe scheming and misunderstandings and the bitch and the bastard causing all sorts of crap. I love your Scott if i said it before I'm saying it again. Great Chapter and keep going.
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