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Reviews for King of Pain

By : lovingall
  • From ANON - Spider on May 25, 2006
    That was SPECTACULAR!!!. Write more of that stuff Dude Rhayn. I just can't see Jean listening to the Professor or Scott because she loves him. I felt kind of bad for her but she did blow up the Greenhouse and that ain't right. I hope Ororo is pregnant that would be alright with me. I love this fic if I have not said it before.
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  • From ANON - SyJen on May 23, 2006
    I have read many x-Men fics that had the kind of Scott where you forget about him the moment you read his name. I can not forget this sexy Scott that you have. That Sex scene was HOTTTTTTT!!!! I am still sweating from it. I hope she is pregnant and Jean leaves him alone, but I think she is desperate so Scott should keep en eye on Ororo. I am a Rolo fan but I love your couple. Fanstatic writing!!
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  • From ANON - Blueviper on May 23, 2006
    MAN!!!! THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!! You better put some more of that in here I read this before on the R.O side. Loved it there LOVE it here. MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on May 23, 2006
    Oh YEAH!!!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!! Do it again!!!! Jean REALLY makes him upset and Ororo plays the price with every powerful thrust LOL. I bet she's going to have his baby after that!!!!! I am hooked again after so long YOU DID NOT LET US DOWN!!!!!! EXCELLENT
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  • From ANON - lil\'bit on May 23, 2006
    I am all tingly and need a serious shower. That was MAGNIFICENT . I am going to read it again as soon as i am done. I hope she is pregnat so Jean can go somewhere and leave Scott alone. LOVE THIS FIC
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  • From ANON - Hornet on May 23, 2006
    That was the most Awesomemist ( made up word) chapter that you have ever written. I am shaking after that. I know Jean is going to do something if Ororo is preggers I hopre so after that SEX!!!! AWESOME
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  • From ANON - Lorna on May 23, 2006
    AWESOME!!! That love scene left ME shaking. Oh BOy RHayn that was AWESOME!!!! AND she might be pregnant. I am in awe of your writing ability This is the best!!!!! and chapter 12 is second. BRAVO BRAVO
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  • From ANON - Kraven on May 22, 2006
    Okay you left us with a cliffhanger, so I suggest that you clear up this and tell us if Ro and Logan see what Jena is doing to Scott. I mean Sexy Scott. I love this fic read it yesterday and it is still Awesome! Get writing
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  • From ANON - Lorna on February 03, 2006
    The word Bitach comes to mind. YOU HAVE TO UODATE SOONER I AM NOT THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR HERE I LOVED THIS STORY FROM THE BEGINNING GREAT STUFF!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hornet on February 02, 2006
    I know the word Bitch has been in everyone's review and guess what it's going to be in mine. Bitch Jean Grey dude what the heck is she thinking that Scott will want her. NOPE!!! SEXY Scott want the Goddess and he has her no matter how Logan tries to be nice. UPDATE
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  • From ANON - Bluflame on February 02, 2006
    What a bitch Jean is. She is so jealous and now she will do this to SCott and think he will want her back. She is so stupid UPDATe I gots to know what happens next love this
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  • From ANON - SafeHaven on February 02, 2006
    WHAt a Bitch and she'e Ororo's friend DANG. Scott better do something because I know Logan would love to catch them like this. UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - NSB on February 02, 2006
    U know I hate that ro is with scotter but goddamn Jean is such a bitch UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - Kraven on February 02, 2006
    Don't let the realtionship end becuase Jean is a bitch. I hope Ororo sends a lightening bolt up her ass. LOVE it Keep Going NOW Excellent work.
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  • From ANON - Spider on February 02, 2006
    Hot Damn this is going to get ugly a hurry Jean is a Bitch blowing up the Greenhouse and what is Logan trying to do is he working with the Bitch. Dude answer my questions.I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!!!!
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