rate_review Reviews

Well, I'm the first? I feel only slightly lucky. Sorry, its true, BUT it is also only the first chp. You had the odd word here or there where I would have used something different, not just a couple errors, and its rather pedestrian (despot takes a local girl for some fun).
Your heroine though Is already marked by his sigil? Do look forward to where you take the God of Mischief.