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"Why can’t you obsess over Jennifer Lawrence like a normal person?” So does Mystique look like J-Law in this universe, because in that case it'd make since that she'd want Scott to be into her.

I Am Loveing The Story So Far. I do Have A couple of questions for yah. When you said This "I'll be posting only at Fanfiction.net and AO3 from now on" did you just Mean This Story or All other storys as well. Also Whats AO3?

Well, that was funny. Mojo getting his comeuppance was quite rewarding to read, and the exchange between the Mastermind sisters was amusing in its sheer cattiness. Looking forward to when Cyclops meets Peter-as-Wolverine; that's gonna be amazingly, hilariously awkward.

I very much enjoyed the first time. Very creative use of mystique and her powers. Some good characterisation of Scott as well. Some minor details about the Ultimates AU seemed off. Like the sex tape thing and I didn't think Ultimate mystique and Rogue were related (but I've not seen enough of ultimate x-men to be sure. I think I mostly stopped reading around the mojo arc)

I skim read the second chapter. But I was mainly trying to see if Scott was there or not. And it ended with a note to go to one of your other stories? Eh, killed my interest since I was interested in reading ultimate handjob.

Great characterization of Scott. Hope you continue.

Very nicely done. It's dark, it's dirty, but it's a lot of fun. It's from a time when Ultimate didn't suck and when it was okay for characters to get a little darker. You took it much further in this. Love how Cyclops turned it into a competition of sorts and how Jean showed that she had a real dark side. Love how you squeezed Rogue in there as well. You even added a reference to Maddie. Great job! Really enjoyed this. Keep up the good work.

MarvelMaster616

Well, that's all kinds of fucked up. The original story of how Logan and Peter switched bodies was fucked up in and of itself, but dropping Peter into a sex show on Krakoa? You are one sick puppy, Zev95, one sick puppy . . .

. . . And I love you for it. Platonically. I'm disturbingly intrigued by what Jean will do to Peter-in-Logan's body; that telepathic link ought to make it easier for him to learn how exactly she likes it, and the misadventures of Logan as he tries to navigate Peter's complicated life (and not-quite-a-relationship with Sue Storm).

As for the first chapter, I was trying hard to imagine how Mystique used her shape-shifting to pull off the impression of a one-woman orgy, and I came away with, in alphabetical order, a boner, a migraine, and a nightmare. Excellent work there, too, and Cyclops going villain is actually quite salient in this contemporary age of Marvel Comics where Wolverine is heading a school for mutants and Cyclops is an outlaw running what could easily be termed a kinder and gentler Brotherhood under the X-Men banner.

Was that an allusion to 'Invisible Handjob' I just saw?