rate_review Reviews

We've come full circle! And now we're in for something awesome!

I really dig this. Definitely feeds the male ego, but I love the idea of Peter-MJ-Felicia in love together.

I am a huge fan of your writing. You're skillful and more careful than most fanfiction authors. The quality is superb. As a storyteller you're just as telented. You are very much a show and not tell kind of writer and that is the best attribute I can name. You have a clear and respect and affection for the worlds you work in.

This is my favorite of your stories, because Spider-man is my favorite comic book hero. I've really enjoyed reading and will definitely look forward to your updates.

Hmmm. Psychics mucking around with your brain now there's the basis of a healthy relationship.

Psylocke is a good addition to the cast though.

Yes, she is indeed sexy, but it's not due to her heritage. That she's Asian (or rather, her host, whichever you prefer) is of no consequence; sexy is sexy. Although she does get bonus points for the accent. Irish, English, and Australian accents have always been a weakness of mine. That was one hell of a gift Felicia sent her, and I'd be fucking jealous, no lie.

Second time, I've read one of your multipart stories, refreshed and immediately got a new chapter.

This one is... more than a little silly. Sexy but very silly. The bitching about Carlie Cooper and Gwen seems a little too... on the nose to me. But I don't read modern spider-man comics so I don't have the same.. strength of feeling where that's concerned. And Darcy appearing seems a little random.

But otherwise fun and sexy. And that's two mentions of pegging now! I hope you're going to follow through on that scene. It's presented as 'lol, Peter's in for a surprise' but I like it. For the last chapter, I really love the letter at the start and the scene with Cap and Tony. That was hilarious. I have no idea who the kraven chick is though.

Well done and keep up the writing1

Part of me really hopes Darcy joins them in there relationship as she really would work well with them.

So awesome. So, so awesome. This does not have nearly enough love in the review section. Good job and keep it up!

Yeah, that chapter pretty much confirmed it. There's no way this is your first steamy story. I mean, it's so graphic, yet still done in a tasteful manner. It's not mindless sex; there's actually feeling, emotion present. Peter is in character, but his hidden wild side is shown after Felicia shamelessly hits on him, and throws herself at him. I envy Peter for being in that situation. I don't know if I would've been able to be in a three-way relationship as Peter is, but the girls don't mind one bit, and demand they be a package deal. It's incredible, and the connection is real. It's not based on mere lust, but bonds of mutual trust, respect, and love. I never thought it possible to actually love more than one person at a time, but the fic makes me wonder. Great job.

You are on fire! Whatever you're taking to churn out these awesome fics, keep it up.