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how wrong is it that i found this slightly hot?

This was an interestingly graphic one-shot. It was nicely detailed, although in some cases it was a bit too detailed. I'm not usually a fan of fics that are this graphic and violent, but you managed to make this a solid story. Your writing style is really good. I think you've got a nice knack for describing and detailing a scene. I would really like to see more stories from you in the future. Any ideas beyond this one? Thanks for writing this and I hope you continue to do so.

MarvelMaster616

That was brutal in a way I could never imagine. It was well written but for a few awkwardb instances of present tense in the first bit. I like your writing, there seems to be a rhythm or timing to it that makes it easy to read more, even if your content is a bit bleaker than I care to seek out. I like stories about hopelessness and capture. About competition and sexual power. I'd like to read more of your work. If you write something with a little more psychological torture over physical brutality, I'll devour it. If you don't, I wish you the best and am certain it will be vivid and well written.