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for The Savage Land Imbroglio

by Ksennin

person Silver
schedule November 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So any chance for a very hot Scott Summers/Jean Grey/Ororo Munroe (Storm) threesome action or possibly even a very hot foursome or even fivesome action involving Emma Frost and Sage with Scott Summers/Jean Grey/Ororo Munroe? Please let me know.
person mci90
schedule October 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Thumbs up to the third-person perspective of the characters and going with their 80s characterization and feel.

I enjoy your Storm and Jean Grey. They feel very in-character, despite the perverted nature of the fic.

Your Emma is a wonderful ode to her 80s hellfire years. A smutty White Queen/Cyclops scene in the future, y/y?

Speaking of the 80s, I love the vintage, perverted feel to the story. The Shanna/Logan scene was fuckin' hot.

This is a high quality fanfic. I look forward to more. Thanks for for the fast chapter updates.
schedule October 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't too sure where you were going with this or what was really going on at first since the first couple of chapters could use a bit more focus on certain things. But now I think I got a handle on it. Although some characters are very out of character such as Emma being the worse case so far, Jean ranks up second at the moment with Logan a little third given the little comments about 'kids' I think was meant as a joke but honestly it wasn't really that funny. It would have made more sense if he thought he would be a horrible father instead given how messed up he and his life are.

I don't know much about Shanna so it's hard to tell with her what's going on, personally I hope next up or soon Scott fucks her and he cums inside of her that I would like to see since Jean is starting to sleep around he should as well. I'm not sure who else will show up but the Sauron/Ororo scene was nice I felt and a good use of his powers.
person Redsliver
schedule September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Congrats, this feels like 80s X-men comics plus classy porn and I am surprised I mean that as a good thing. I loved the post Storm escape scenes from Tessa's hatred to the Nightcrawler flirting but especially Piotr's interest in lockpicking. Hopefully you will inspire some more of your readers to comment.

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