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so very funny and good i hope they tell thor that harry was talking about his cock. love this

when you say fruit squash, do you mean fruit smoothies or fruit juice? will harry experience food cravings like most pregnant women do? or mood swings? when I was pregnant with my son I craved chocolate covered black olives with cherry sauce, cheese curds, and clam chowder. will the avengers enable harry to visit the graves of his family? or maybe just clint? as a way to court harry. I cant wait for the next chapter. I just love how you have portrayed a pregnant harry in your stories. do you celebrate St. Patrick's day? if you do happy St. Paddy's.

Thank you for two quick updates! I'm glad that at the end of this last chapter Harry was acting more, well...Harryish with his reaction to Clint. I mean I understand that he is upset about being a dad at such a young age and how it happened but he's been acting like such a spoiled immature brat the last couple chapters I wanted to smack him. His attitude and mannerisms have done a complete 180 compared to how he acted in the first chapter, it's like he's a different Harry. Don't get me wrong I am still really into this story and excited to see the Avenger's reaction to Harry's magic and he and Clint working out their relationship. Can't wait for the next update.

Awesome star love this love the last comment part.Natasha's a bitch it wasn't her place to say anything harry is free to do whatever he want's clint not he's bonded did she forget that clint rape harry what if it was her she understand be buddy buddy with clint if he did it to her . i don't think so.Just not her place beside's I don't think that they should have let harry go by himself they should have had someone following in not being seen. For protecting but she had no right to say anything to harry about clint if harry wanted to be with thor he can i don't see thor or any of them taking harry away from clint but still. ask yourself would you want to be mated to your accidental rapist.i think that clint needs to prove himself to harry because it was a accident but keep pushing harry and he might just get up and leave since they don't no about magic they might never fine harry and she should be happy that harry hasn't charged him yet. even steve and thor wanted to kick clint's ass but they understand what happen i say Natasha should just leave harry alone. love tony in the rest. harry need's time. awesome brilliant love it

I'm curious if he'll use the cloak and freak one of the Avengers with it xD

ugh what is wrong with Nat >[ that was uncalled for...
thank u for the update

Hello, StarLight_Massacre. First, I really enjoy your stories; especially Lycanthrope Factory, The Rise of the Drackens, and this one. My favorite is Lycanthrope Factory because I love Harry Potter/Anita Blake crossovers. I agree with you that there aren't enough of them. The ones I have found almost never get finished. I've only recently discovered Harry Potter/Avengers crossovers and it's quickly becoming a favorite as well. I like that you chose Clint as Harry's partner; it is usually one of the more noticable Avengers, like Tony or Steve. Second, I have noticed in this story that you use a lot of run-on sentences with the use of commas. I went back though the other two stories and found that there were a few in each of the chapters. However, it happens much more often in this story which is why I noticed it. I actually feel like a jerk even mentioning it because the stories themselves are really great. Thanks for continuing to write these stories. I hope my review was helpful and not discouraging. Thank you, Danielle

kind of funny how harry gots the hots for thor awesome love it and for tony blueberry pancakes cookies cheesecake ice cream bread so many things loving that i love that pepper was on harry's side that was awesome but so looking forward to harry getting with clint i also love the knotting when they mate so clint wants to be with harry but that will take a lot and i can only guess that adult heat means harry was a virgin so cool kind of wish that they all work it out by tony we know that they all think harry is sexy s as hell so that his really good love when harry told clint if he touch his child he'll snap his neck that was awesome hope the potion help harry's legs

At first I was slightly upset that you had worked on writing this and not The Rise of the Drackens. I take it back. I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^

This is grantastic! Though there is a mistake in the part where you write about Harry's owl order. I don't think he is the type to get things full of "slave".