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August 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story. It feels like a god honest continuation of the Spectacular Spider-Man. Your even using the Educating Peter Parker for naming your chapters and story arcs just as the series did. I check this website almost every week just to see if you updated the story. The tone is perfect. I can easily see Peter feeling and doing everything he's done so far in the actual series. His growing relationship with Mary Jane has been a high light. I was genuinely surprised when she found it he was Spider-Man, but you pulled it off well. Not only is she a valuable secret keeper, but provides Peter a source of comfort ad encouragement that he hasn't had in the series itself, because he had to keep his identity a secret. Flash is the right mix of bully for Peter and heart of gold that was hinted and shown in SSM. Kudos for capturing it. It is easy to forget Flash is a good guy deep down. I fully intrigued how you will reveal Peter and Flash's fallout as kids.
I love your Black Cat. She's ever bit as flirtatious and witty as I expect her to be. Her complicated love and hate relationship with Spidey has me on the edge of my seat. I have no idea if she will carry out her revenge on him or not. Her reaction to his age was priceless. It's only 3 year difference. Technically she is a legal adult, but 16 and 19 seems minor for that reaction to me, but that's just me. That's another relationship I'm interested how it turns out. With Peter/Liz, Gwen/Harry, Peter/MJ, Spider/Cat stuff it has me playing the guessing game in a good way.
The villains, what can I say you've hit out of the ball park again. One of the things I loved about SSM was that most of the major supervillains as small cameos first then bring them to their supervillain identity. Jack O'Lantern being one of Goblin's henchmen who re-modified his tech was good use of characters introduced in the series who could have easily been turned into this villain. Hobie's turn into Prowler I felt was good. Hobie wasn't given character development in the series before it was canned. I appreciated you interpreted his background and used it to enhance his transformation to the Prowler. Scorpion was a villain I was looking forward to seeing SSM. Glad to see him here. You're already setting up the Hobgoblin story arc with Roderick Kingsley taking over OsCorp. Dr. Warren has Peter's DNA. I'm wondering if this will lead to a Clone Saga in the near future or another season. It's just been a wonderful read really. I'm very eager to read how it unfolds. You are doing a great job. Your story isn't getting enough recognition. I wanted to write this review.
I love your Black Cat. She's ever bit as flirtatious and witty as I expect her to be. Her complicated love and hate relationship with Spidey has me on the edge of my seat. I have no idea if she will carry out her revenge on him or not. Her reaction to his age was priceless. It's only 3 year difference. Technically she is a legal adult, but 16 and 19 seems minor for that reaction to me, but that's just me. That's another relationship I'm interested how it turns out. With Peter/Liz, Gwen/Harry, Peter/MJ, Spider/Cat stuff it has me playing the guessing game in a good way.
The villains, what can I say you've hit out of the ball park again. One of the things I loved about SSM was that most of the major supervillains as small cameos first then bring them to their supervillain identity. Jack O'Lantern being one of Goblin's henchmen who re-modified his tech was good use of characters introduced in the series who could have easily been turned into this villain. Hobie's turn into Prowler I felt was good. Hobie wasn't given character development in the series before it was canned. I appreciated you interpreted his background and used it to enhance his transformation to the Prowler. Scorpion was a villain I was looking forward to seeing SSM. Glad to see him here. You're already setting up the Hobgoblin story arc with Roderick Kingsley taking over OsCorp. Dr. Warren has Peter's DNA. I'm wondering if this will lead to a Clone Saga in the near future or another season. It's just been a wonderful read really. I'm very eager to read how it unfolds. You are doing a great job. Your story isn't getting enough recognition. I wanted to write this review.
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July 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter. Keep up the graet work
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July 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I liked where the story went, and there was a lot of content to it. But it felt a bit all-over-the-place and there were a ton of spelling mistakes this time around, unlike your older work.
Sorry to hear about your computer, I hope things will go more smoothly in coming months. I missed this story a lot, much like I missed the series it was based on.
Sorry to hear about your computer, I hope things will go more smoothly in coming months. I missed this story a lot, much like I missed the series it was based on.
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July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Good to see you writing and sorry about what happened to your computer. I had something similar happen once and lost all my story data as well so I know how much that sucks.
Well, my favorite thing that occurred in this chapter was the Peter/Liz scene. I liked all the different emotions that the two were experiencing through it, and the way Liz seduced/manipulated Peter.
The Peter/MJ scenes were good as well.
So~, Kraven's dead eh? That kinda sucks. I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for, Calypso or Peter.
Gonna be interesting to see what the word is with Captain Stacy and Peter.
Keep up the good work! I look forward to more!
Well, my favorite thing that occurred in this chapter was the Peter/Liz scene. I liked all the different emotions that the two were experiencing through it, and the way Liz seduced/manipulated Peter.
The Peter/MJ scenes were good as well.
So~, Kraven's dead eh? That kinda sucks. I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for, Calypso or Peter.
Gonna be interesting to see what the word is with Captain Stacy and Peter.
Keep up the good work! I look forward to more!
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July 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well he took some hits here so I hope in the next chapter things go better for Pete, also I hope you make Black Cat realize the dangers of pissing him off in her misguided attempts at payback...perhaps a nice bath in some gene cleanser will straighten her out, hmm?
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July 14, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey, story is great, very well written, and has a good mix of Peter Parker drama and Spider-Man action very much like the show. Can't wait to read more.
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May 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is easily one of the best fics i've ever written, to one of the greatest cartoons i've ever watched.
Its a damn shame that you don't have more people reading this. Damn shame.
Its a damn shame that you don't have more people reading this. Damn shame.
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April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Start keep up The Great work
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.
Liked the fight scenes and banter with the Prowler. Keep that up, you seem to have a good understanding of how Web-Head fights.
Loved the bit with the random New Yorker yelling Web-Hole at Spidey, BTW.
Character development was good all around. No complaints there.
So is there something else to that bit with Peter/Liz where chapter 3 left off? Felt just a little bit disconnected there.
So, big thing here that I would really like to know. The story description says this is gonna be a Peter/Gwen and Spidy/Black Cat fic. Now I don't mind Black Cat, but I honestly don't really like Gwen, particularly in the Spectacular Spider-Man. And this story has so far seemed more MJ/Peter/Liz, which I won't lie, is far more appealing to me, since MJ has been very well written and likeable so far in this, and Liz is sympathetic and, like I mentioned in a previous review, I really liked Spectacular's take on her character.
Now I'm not saying ignore Peter's relationship with Gwen or continuity from the show, and the last thing I would ever want to do is tell a writer what to do with his fic, but I would really like to know if this is gonna be just a Gwen/Peter thing, or if the other girls have any kinda shot in this. Don't need spoilers or anything like that, just if I actually have anything to look forward to in the romance department.
Great work, I look forward to more!
Liked the fight scenes and banter with the Prowler. Keep that up, you seem to have a good understanding of how Web-Head fights.
Loved the bit with the random New Yorker yelling Web-Hole at Spidey, BTW.
Character development was good all around. No complaints there.
So is there something else to that bit with Peter/Liz where chapter 3 left off? Felt just a little bit disconnected there.
So, big thing here that I would really like to know. The story description says this is gonna be a Peter/Gwen and Spidy/Black Cat fic. Now I don't mind Black Cat, but I honestly don't really like Gwen, particularly in the Spectacular Spider-Man. And this story has so far seemed more MJ/Peter/Liz, which I won't lie, is far more appealing to me, since MJ has been very well written and likeable so far in this, and Liz is sympathetic and, like I mentioned in a previous review, I really liked Spectacular's take on her character.
Now I'm not saying ignore Peter's relationship with Gwen or continuity from the show, and the last thing I would ever want to do is tell a writer what to do with his fic, but I would really like to know if this is gonna be just a Gwen/Peter thing, or if the other girls have any kinda shot in this. Don't need spoilers or anything like that, just if I actually have anything to look forward to in the romance department.
Great work, I look forward to more!
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April 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! It's always exciting to see an update from you. Also, you posted this on my birthday. I must say, truly a splendid gift.
You write Peter so well, it's honestly the continuation I could only hope for. Of course you write all the characters well, not just peter. In particular, it's nice to see Flash as a genuinely nice guy while maintaining his usual dislike of Peter. It's part of his personality that often gets forgotten. My only complaint is, and will always be, there is not enough Felecia Hardy. Joking aside, I do hope to see them meet up again soon.
Until next time.
You write Peter so well, it's honestly the continuation I could only hope for. Of course you write all the characters well, not just peter. In particular, it's nice to see Flash as a genuinely nice guy while maintaining his usual dislike of Peter. It's part of his personality that often gets forgotten. My only complaint is, and will always be, there is not enough Felecia Hardy. Joking aside, I do hope to see them meet up again soon.
Until next time.