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March 29, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Loved it sequel?
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September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good story. I was relieved to see that it would not turn into a rape, I find it a billion times moooore hot when everybody is enjoying themselves. And you managed to add some deepness to your characters with very few words.
And I am glad you made a kind of epilogue with a happy ending ^^
The only thing that bothers me is when Tony licks Loki's blood on his fingers... I can't see how it fits his tenderness, I think he should have been more troubled to see blood. But it's just an impression :)
And I am glad you made a kind of epilogue with a happy ending ^^
The only thing that bothers me is when Tony licks Loki's blood on his fingers... I can't see how it fits his tenderness, I think he should have been more troubled to see blood. But it's just an impression :)