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November 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I normally don't read Storm pairings but I'm so glad I read this one. You write Tony to hilarious effect. :)
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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, this is great. No, seriously. I LOVED Tony's dialogue. Totally perfect. And the moment when the walked into the room and he made the whole dinosaur spiel/comment? I cracked up. Great characterization, subtly sexy (like, no, Tony wasn't exactly being sublte BUT...by AFF standards, this whole piece is subtle...)...but I still loved it.
If I could "favorite" it, I would, and I went and checked to see if you'd written anything else...pouted when I saw you hadn't. Keep up the good work; you have talent for dialogue.
~Moonstar
If I could "favorite" it, I would, and I went and checked to see if you'd written anything else...pouted when I saw you hadn't. Keep up the good work; you have talent for dialogue.
~Moonstar
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October 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well done! D'Angelo's always a nice mood setter.
If you ever plan to follow this up with a sexed-up sequel, might I suggest naming it Untitled (How does it feel?)
.....the video for this song really explains why~
If you ever plan to follow this up with a sexed-up sequel, might I suggest naming it Untitled (How does it feel?)
.....the video for this song really explains why~
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October 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
just finished brown sugar and have to say am REALLY looking forward to see what happens never thought of this pairiing but now that i think about it it seems really good PLEASE keep up the good work.