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November 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
D'awwww - so sweet! :3 I like that it actually /felt/ like roleplay. Usually it seems like people will start telling the story like it's actual super serious bondage and/or rape and then at the tail end they're like, "Oh, haha, just kidding!" And it feels like they just told a big story and then brushed it off with and "It was all a dream!" ending. Pretty lame. In fact, I think this may be the FIRST time I've seen someone write a roleplay sex scene where it's obvious the entire time the characters are roleplaying and...
Well, obviously I think you did a very good job of it. It's quite realistic (I can relate...to the extent that I can't even successfully roleplay with my signficant other because I DO bust out laughing), but I think Charles and Erik did an admirable job, considering all those lovely cheesy lines they pulled. xD And the end was of course oh so cute as well. I'm a sucker for the sappy stuff sometimes......a lot of the time.
Also, sorry for spamming you with reviews, but I tend to think that people don't review enough, so I try (emphasis on try...) to review anything I really enjoy, and your work just makes me smile and laugh. Great writing. Thanks again for sharing! :D
~Moonstar
Well, obviously I think you did a very good job of it. It's quite realistic (I can relate...to the extent that I can't even successfully roleplay with my signficant other because I DO bust out laughing), but I think Charles and Erik did an admirable job, considering all those lovely cheesy lines they pulled. xD And the end was of course oh so cute as well. I'm a sucker for the sappy stuff sometimes......a lot of the time.
Also, sorry for spamming you with reviews, but I tend to think that people don't review enough, so I try (emphasis on try...) to review anything I really enjoy, and your work just makes me smile and laugh. Great writing. Thanks again for sharing! :D
~Moonstar