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November 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww...poor Raven. I dunno, I've always thought her power is wicked awesome, but it definitely has the drawback of...well, people subtly taking advantage of it, I guess? I mean, too be appreciated more in a body not your own, even when it's just sex...
Well. The scene was still hot, in any case, and despite the twinge of sympathy I felt for Raven, I'm still glad that Charles and Erik were still obviously "magnetically" attracted to each other. I really like the idea of using telepathy to share each other's experiences; it was an interesting way of making the threesome more 'together' so to speak (if that makes any sense...).
Raven's making fun of Charles's pick-up lines at the beginning is still probably my favorite part, though. Just...that whole opening banter scene. You do humor very well, as though I haven't mentioned that yet. :)
~Moonstar
Well. The scene was still hot, in any case, and despite the twinge of sympathy I felt for Raven, I'm still glad that Charles and Erik were still obviously "magnetically" attracted to each other. I really like the idea of using telepathy to share each other's experiences; it was an interesting way of making the threesome more 'together' so to speak (if that makes any sense...).
Raven's making fun of Charles's pick-up lines at the beginning is still probably my favorite part, though. Just...that whole opening banter scene. You do humor very well, as though I haven't mentioned that yet. :)
~Moonstar