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June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This demands a sequel. Preferably taking place 9-11 months later.
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice Story!! I look forward to reading more of yours...or a continuation of this one.
One little nit-picky thing...every time you change speakers, you start a new paragraph. Like i said, nit-picky...but you said it was your first story. :)
One little nit-picky thing...every time you change speakers, you start a new paragraph. Like i said, nit-picky...but you said it was your first story. :)