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June 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This amazing!
I love that's it's such a complex story - an actual STORY!
I hope you will continue this. ^^
I love that's it's such a complex story - an actual STORY!
I hope you will continue this. ^^
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May 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is fine as it is. The reason for the violent encounter was very clear and it made sense in the context you put it in. Now.....if you want to have Vanko care for her after, that would make sense as well. It read like he lost control for a few minutes.
psyche b
psyche b
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY for updates! It was a good update too :)
You probably didn't realize this, there are two repeats of the chapter on the page. Not a complaint, just a head's up.
More please!
You probably didn't realize this, there are two repeats of the chapter on the page. Not a complaint, just a head's up.
More please!
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January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
YAY! So glad to see the update. :) I hope there is alot more (and much more detail) to come. There just aren't enough stories about Mr. Vanko out there....
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January 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue with this story. Chapter 2 definitely left me curious and wanting more. :)