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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but Creed's last line made me laugh XD I'd end up dead if I did that to his face. I really like how you write Victor Creed in this chapter. I thought it was a great chapter.
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
:D LOVE the crazy sex in this story :D lol it's so awesome :D
I really can't wait for another update, it's like I'm starting to know Victor better :)
I really can't wait for another update, it's like I'm starting to know Victor better :)
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Scary, scary scary guy, that victor creed. Good chapter!
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow... awesome :D I'm just loving this story... I never thought I would read anything with Victor Creed as the main character, I'm usually a Romy fan, and anything with Logan in it XD but, wow, this has got to be one of my favorite stories now, fantastic!!
And I love how quickly you update!!! Woo!! keep teh awesomenessness and sexsh comin!! XD WOO!!!!!!!!!!
And I love how quickly you update!!! Woo!! keep teh awesomenessness and sexsh comin!! XD WOO!!!!!!!!!!
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like the updates. I wonder though. Will Victor ever feel comfortable enough around Kelly not to make threats? The way he "trains" her makes me mad. But, hey, what can I say? That's Victor Creed.
I hope to see their relationship develop further. I can tell he's already falling for her though. I feel sorry for the poor sucker that does Kelly any harm.
Please keep updating! Love the story. :)
I hope to see their relationship develop further. I can tell he's already falling for her though. I feel sorry for the poor sucker that does Kelly any harm.
Please keep updating! Love the story. :)
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's great to see some of the old Victor back here. I've always enjoyed the idea of him skinning a victim alive as a torture method. As always, masterfully written and touching in that odd way that you portray so well. Keep up the great work.
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November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOO!! Amazing chapter :) Loved the gore too.. fuckin awesome :D I can't wait for the next chapter, I'm just loving this story! :D
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now that was a interesting chapter, killing a guy then going home to her. I want to know where he's going to stash her. Is she going to ever find who was the second number?
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November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, omfg, I fucking love this story!!!!! it is FANTASTIC!! I can't wait for an update :)
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November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's pretty realistic I think if you go from the origins movie I think.