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Wah! Wheres the updates! Please dont leave us hangin! This is an awesome story!

Wow, I'd seen the story on here but hadn't been too interested in it. Then I started reading it today, and suddenly I couldn't stop. It is amazing, how well the story flows, staying true to the characters and maintaining a fascinating plotline at the same time. I can't wait to see what happens next! Good job and keep writing!
Kaetti

I like the fact that you gave Victor a dose of humanity without turning into a sap!

Oh my God..... I'm kinda shocked by the end there..... I don't know why exactly though...

And wow... Victor is really starting to get soft with her :D lol I like it ;)

I really hope you update again really really soon... this is pretty much the only story I'm reading (can't find anything else good.. I usually like stories with Rogue and Gambit it them, but everything I've been reading can't keep my interest past the first chapter...)

UPDATE SOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Who would be stupid enough to try to break into Creed's domain? I love this story..... your Creed still scares me.

I really liked this chapter :) He's starting to get much more sensitive with her and caring :) Lol I'm actually liking the slow inevitable change in him XD

My god... this story is AMAZING! How have I not found it before now???? I love how true to character you kept him. And that you somehow made an OC that I didnt want to kill lol. I cant even list all of the things I love about this story so far. Man I cant wait to read the next chapter now!!!!

I discovered this site, and your story, a few days ago, and I have thoroughly enjoyed both. Your characterization of Sabretooth is nuanced and interesting, and I especially like how well you've kept the core of the Marvel creation intact while putting your own spin on him. You've given him a third dimension that he lacks, all too often, in the comics and movies. Your OC, Kelly, matches this new Sabretooth very well, and her complexity in thoughts and emotions is a breath of fresh air.

The smut is well-written and hotter than Johnny Storm on a August day, and the balance of tension between arousal and worry for Kelly and her sanity and physical safety is . . . stimulating . . . to say the least. I love the dominance games you've written Victor as indulging in. I am awaiting your next update with bated breath.

I really like and dislike this story at the same time. I love how you describe Victor's personality and how you describe him as a character, and at times I'm even sympathizing with him--Kelly, not so much. I still don't feel much for Kelly's character and I'm finding it hard to picture her enjoying the consensual relationship she is having with Victor. I think it's from a lack of explanation of just how they are feeling...even though they seem to have touched on their emotions multiple times-but nothing really in depth. It really is just one person's opinion on this and I do like the story you have written so far and I hope you will continue.

Oooooh, blast from the past might not be so good for creed. Kelly better get away from colon guy, it does not bode well for her I feel. Any chance of her ever meeting Jimmy?