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July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't belive that I took me this long to review this...
Fantastic Story, I'm almost sad that it ended. But what an ending! I love the way you worked with the characters, they were absalutly in tune with their usual quirks and habits. An absalute 5 out of 5!
Fantastic Story, I'm almost sad that it ended. But what an ending! I love the way you worked with the characters, they were absalutly in tune with their usual quirks and habits. An absalute 5 out of 5!
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April 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think i've read this one before but it was so good i didn't mind reading it again. great job!
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April 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"I'll give ya mother hen, ya little shit." Priceless.
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING WORK!!! Oh man, this was an excellent update!
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I actually had to go back and read several chapters when I realized how far behind I was and how many updates I missed. There are moments in this that tickle me for how simple yet how charming they are, like Logan making Remy a big sandwich. I LOVE Vic's demise, that was old-school justice and it reminds the reader that Remy himself can be a badass, too, not just someone Logan feels he has to protect. Remy's charming Ororo was another detail, too, that gets applause from me. That's a canon power for him, the aspect of his empathy that you really do see in the comics.
Keep it coming. THis was awesome.
Keep it coming. THis was awesome.
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amazingly well written!!! Loved it all!
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September 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
really good. email me when you write more
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad to see this here! It's easier to read again when it's all in one place. :)
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September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*paws through it* there's no more??? *sniffle*
The formatting of the dialogue paragraphs was tricky to read since there weren't any breaks between each line when it was a different speaker, but aside from that, this was well written. Logan's a big softie when it counts, and a bad ass when he's around Creed.
But this line...yeah, I like this one:
"Do you need mood lighting or something?"
that cracked me up.
Good lemon going on in this fic. I wouldn't mind Remy being more aggressive once he's recovered, but again, it's nice to see Logan being gentle with him.
The formatting of the dialogue paragraphs was tricky to read since there weren't any breaks between each line when it was a different speaker, but aside from that, this was well written. Logan's a big softie when it counts, and a bad ass when he's around Creed.
But this line...yeah, I like this one:
"Do you need mood lighting or something?"
that cracked me up.
Good lemon going on in this fic. I wouldn't mind Remy being more aggressive once he's recovered, but again, it's nice to see Logan being gentle with him.