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for The Goodbye

by bioxyde5

schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
good story. The tags are off though, I wouldn't of put dom/sub in the tags. Tabitha was controlling but not dominating. She def took the lead but she didnt really dom. I would of like a chapter or two more, it would of been fun to read about what they did to get in trouble and everything before the sex scene. So next time maybe some lead up? All in all id give it a 4 out of 5, and i hope to see more!

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