rate_review Reviews

That was awesome. I loved it. Great job!

I rather liked this, which pleasantly surprised me, I'd just decided to take a peek at it on a whim. I thought the way you described John without ever showing us his perspective was even more effective than if you had jumped POVs. I also think you did an absolutely awesome job on keeping them both in character, very impressive with these two particularly.

Looking forward to seeing more from you.

~Kalira