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July 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was really beautiful! I mean, despite the fact Logan REALLY needed to work on his temper, it was still a beautiful story and Logan and Ororo are together with their 3 soon-to-be 4 children. Just wonderful that even with all things that happened, they loved each other enough to try to work it out.
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July 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why no one has reviewed this story, especially since its been AFF for a while now, so I guess I'll be the first and hopefully not the last.
I just kind of fell into the Wolverine/Storm pairing for some reason. I find the pairing extremely appealing. Anyway what drew me to your story was the fact that it was complete, cause nothing drives me nuts more than an imcomplete story. Anyway I love, love the pairing and I love the angst so very much. I like how you drew it out for as long as you possibly could. I also enjoyed the fact that it was more than just sex, mind you the sex was well written, thank you. The romance was lovely, the characters were wonderfully flawed and moody like teenagers should be. I have read and reread your chapters over again tons of times. It has become a pleasure that touches that sweet tooth of mine. Again, thanks.
I have only one wish about your story and that is during the scene where Logan tells Ororo that he's a dick, that she knows it and the whole school knows it and would've done anything she asked to get her to forgive him I wish you had had her make Logan stand up in the middle of the cafeteria and actually declared his dick-iness along with his love for her. That would've been both extremely touching and hilarious. Okay, now that I have that off my chest, over all I love, love, love your story. :-)
I just kind of fell into the Wolverine/Storm pairing for some reason. I find the pairing extremely appealing. Anyway what drew me to your story was the fact that it was complete, cause nothing drives me nuts more than an imcomplete story. Anyway I love, love the pairing and I love the angst so very much. I like how you drew it out for as long as you possibly could. I also enjoyed the fact that it was more than just sex, mind you the sex was well written, thank you. The romance was lovely, the characters were wonderfully flawed and moody like teenagers should be. I have read and reread your chapters over again tons of times. It has become a pleasure that touches that sweet tooth of mine. Again, thanks.
I have only one wish about your story and that is during the scene where Logan tells Ororo that he's a dick, that she knows it and the whole school knows it and would've done anything she asked to get her to forgive him I wish you had had her make Logan stand up in the middle of the cafeteria and actually declared his dick-iness along with his love for her. That would've been both extremely touching and hilarious. Okay, now that I have that off my chest, over all I love, love, love your story. :-)