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for The Pink Panther

by chishiro

schedule September 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm somewhat disappointed, it sounded like it was gonna be really kinky and it has run into a stone wall. Pouting.
I must commemorate the 'garden gnome' line, that had laughing hysterically.
Your writing is good, but is somewhat confusing as to who is speaking when. Perhaps a little more description of what is going on around the characters. But a very good effort all the same.
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have never imagined a HankxBobby pairing ever before - thank you so very much for opening up a world of new possibility for me. Oh, and your remark on Bobby being Hank's mate - I always think past Hank's feral appearance and think of him as a scholary, dignified person. His animal instincts though, are very much present and thank you again for calling that to atteniton. Great story, and I hope you continue!

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