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Hi this is really good I hope you aren't discouraged by the lack of reviews - Pyro is cool but not the first character people are drawn to. But he has oodles of depth and lots of character flaws (I personally ship Pyro/Kitty as they make an interesting foil). I also like your OC can't wait to learn more about her.

I just found this storie and I love it! I think it would be great to see a second part to this!

Wow. This definately is a great story. I love how it ended too. And I can't believe your story didn't get an ass load of reviews, it was awesome.

Good job!

I love the fact that you've deliberately written it from Pyro's POV and I think you've captured that angst teenage attitude perfectly. Martha's an interesting character especially since she's so "behind the scenes" and I love the fact you've given her a power that's not incredibly powerful but useful for Magneto's purposes. I'm definitely enjoying this so far and can't wait to see how this develops.