rate_review Reviews

I'm not sure who Vega is, but I like the way you've written him in this fic. He interacts well with Storm. I hope you do continue this.

*huggles* You "finished" it. This is not bad at all. I know I threw you for a loop by being particular at the last minute, but I think you adjusted well. I love this pairing. They're an awesome combination of naughty and nice. I want more stories with this pairing. I'll be your muse for the rest of your life if you do it. :-)

That was awesomely hot and sensual.

Just a few grammatical errors here and there, like missing words...but not really enough to distract.