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for I Feel Fine

by roxierose13

person asm613
schedule June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely like your writing style. Very centered around emotion. You write the
physical aspects very well also; but they don't mean as much without the emotional.
Poor John...thinking he doesn't deserve to love bobby, shouldn't love bobby- because
he doesn't want to hurt bobby and he's afraid bobby will hurt him because his love
for him leaves him feeling so vulnerable. Glad that you let Bobby ease his concerns.
thanks again for sharing your writings.
person spock74
schedule March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again with the hot. And the sweet. I may want to marry you at some point.
person BR
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That right there is a beautiful fic. Just the right amount of angst, sex and make up ^_^ Normally I don't read one shots because some of them leave you hanging - not in a good way - but I'd like to see more of this fic (like, hinthint)simply because it's so sweet ^_^ Go you!

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