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May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NO!! Jean Paul! The thought that Jean Paul would-! I'm horrified! But lovely story... (I will hate Walter with Bobby)
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January 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh NO......! How upsetting - I love it! SO beautiful, so wonderful... so horribly depressing. I feel so bad for Bobby - but I feel even worse for Jean-Paul.
God that was upsetting.
God that was upsetting.
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January 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was ultra depressing, I knew it would be, but still: damn
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn. Giant piles of kudos and fantastic writing. So, yeah, you win one(1) Interwebz for being made of awesome.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree with WindKaizer! This was great. I'm a big fan of angst and I loved this. I really hope you plan on countining it. I to wonder when Jean Paul shall leave Bobby or will he notice what is going on with the man he "loves". Will Walter return? Who knows....unless you countine. ^_^ The grammar and spelling were excellent, much better than anything I could do. You have a strong plot base. When you countine, I shall return, till then I'll put this in my Faves for future reading and reference.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn! That was good as hell. I love the dark feel to this story. Something tells me you could continue the story. And if you could, I'll be here reviewing.