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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like the character developement and the way use of flashbacks as well as the vivid imagery. Plus it's an addictive kind of story, one you want to read through until the end....there is more coming for this too though, right? Maybe a happy ending?
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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dang, this fic is so good to read to "Pain" by Three Days Grace. Did you mean to do that? Can't wait for the next chapter!
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for a first fic I'm curious to see where you go from here. Logan needs to wake up and tell Remy the truth before something bad happens. I hope to read another update soon. :)
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your story so far. It seems to flow pretty well, and there is character development. Sometimes people forget that their characters need to move forward even when you are writing a short story. Anyway, just wanted to encourage you to keep writing.