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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this! Its a fantastic premise!
I don't want to seem critical, but it is terribly short. (I just put a "but" in there and felt really bad about it. I hate doing that.)
This story has all the elements of great femslash, but it needs some serious decompression. Thankfully the elements are there and I loved the Emma POV.
I look forward to reading more from you...
I don't want to seem critical, but it is terribly short. (I just put a "but" in there and felt really bad about it. I hate doing that.)
This story has all the elements of great femslash, but it needs some serious decompression. Thankfully the elements are there and I loved the Emma POV.
I look forward to reading more from you...