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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I finally caught up. There have been a few disapointed scenes but overall it's an okay fic, not yoru best but then you're not concered with things like plot and character being totally in character so I can understand a few things and a few holes here and there.
Anyway the Rogue/Remy/Warren scene was nice. Logan/Mystique wasn't too bad either and I do wonder where it will lead to later on. How about her and Beast? A little blue on blue action if you will.
Although I am confused as to why Betsy was in her X-Men gear when she wasn't. Maybe if it had been a one piece swimsuit would have worked a bit better. But anyway would that cover be a duel cover? I've seen that done before with the WWE divas once who were on it. Although I guess it was through Mystique's contacts that got them in there.
You know I can't wait for Rogue and then maybe later on you have Wanda (after her shoot of course) and Rogue for the halloween issue lol. Maybe while at the photoshoot together they get a little hot and after in the change room deside to help each other out. Also will we see any famous playmates at some point? I think a little cameo with a few getting lucky with those ladies could be nice and you'd expect to see a few famous people to show up in a fic like this too.
Oh and I keep forgetting but when did Amanda become a mutant?
Anyway the Rogue/Remy/Warren scene was nice. Logan/Mystique wasn't too bad either and I do wonder where it will lead to later on. How about her and Beast? A little blue on blue action if you will.
Although I am confused as to why Betsy was in her X-Men gear when she wasn't. Maybe if it had been a one piece swimsuit would have worked a bit better. But anyway would that cover be a duel cover? I've seen that done before with the WWE divas once who were on it. Although I guess it was through Mystique's contacts that got them in there.
You know I can't wait for Rogue and then maybe later on you have Wanda (after her shoot of course) and Rogue for the halloween issue lol. Maybe while at the photoshoot together they get a little hot and after in the change room deside to help each other out. Also will we see any famous playmates at some point? I think a little cameo with a few getting lucky with those ladies could be nice and you'd expect to see a few famous people to show up in a fic like this too.
Oh and I keep forgetting but when did Amanda become a mutant?
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter loved that it was bets emma and jean on scott can't wait to find out what happens next
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter loved the x23 and alex scene
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Up to Chapter 7
Well so far it's okay although is Dani bipolar? Because she went from shy to sex freak WAY too fast there. It kind of took away from the scene how fast she just changed like that, you got to remember to keep them in character at least somewhat in character.
THe X23 wasn't what I had hoped but I guess you're just leading it up to something else later on right? And why is it all the virgin girls have no heymen? I mean a few should still have it but they all lost it in some way, plus I think you used that 'grown over time' thing again only slightly different keep an eye out for that.
Well so far it's okay although is Dani bipolar? Because she went from shy to sex freak WAY too fast there. It kind of took away from the scene how fast she just changed like that, you got to remember to keep them in character at least somewhat in character.
THe X23 wasn't what I had hoped but I guess you're just leading it up to something else later on right? And why is it all the virgin girls have no heymen? I mean a few should still have it but they all lost it in some way, plus I think you used that 'grown over time' thing again only slightly different keep an eye out for that.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
man, that was a fun chapter. can't wait to see Jean's bday surprise for Scott tho. till next update.
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December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3
WEll I read up to this much and so far I like what you got going here, it has decent plot and nice sex scenes, the one with Rogue and Kurt and Amanda I think I enjoyed the most so far.
WEll I read up to this much and so far I like what you got going here, it has decent plot and nice sex scenes, the one with Rogue and Kurt and Amanda I think I enjoyed the most so far.
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December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading ch 9 but I had an Idea I wanted to share
Scott and jean should be invited as guests of Howard Stern He loves playmates on his show
I just thought that would be fun
Scott and jean should be invited as guests of Howard Stern He loves playmates on his show
I just thought that would be fun
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oooh, that was a great chapter. i thought the professor was gonna say something else. haha, but then again, he really is an understanding man. nice moment with the Ororo/Logan scene. Can't wait to read more!!!
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG THAT WAS AWESOME I LOVED THE TWIST ABOUT EVERYONE GETTING IN PLAYBOY(and playgirl) AND I THINK STORM WILL MAKE ONE HELL OF A CENTERFOLD
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December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, this is some of the most incredibly bad porn I've ever read. Not to mention that the characters are completely unrecognizable. Have you ever even had sex? Have any of the people reading and reviewing this ever had sex? It reads like a sixteen year old virgin's fantasy. I will give you points for the spelling being better than most of the schlock on here, though the punctuation's iffy and your word choice and sentence structure are awkward at best in what little I managed to wade through before my brain started turning to mush.